*long whistle... *

Dun dun DUN!

... damn.

Im sorry i dont mean to be rude but... HOW DARE YOU! I HAVENT SEEN THAT YET! UGH! You are supposed to right (WARNING SPOILERS AHEAD.) Then right the spoiler! Why!

"Savage screamed and kicked a bucket into the air as he trotted over to Savage's body. He then proceeded to kick Savage in the gut, effectively waking the man up."
Omfg. I'm DEAD.

Negative

Loved the story! Please write more like it! Please? I like it that hiccup and toothless switched roles , that it was hiccups turn to protect toothless. I also lik the fact that in the story you showed how no one is invincible, that toothless and hiccup can actually get hurt. In the movies and tv shows, no one gets hurt, no matter how high they were when they fell. And the bad guys can never hit anything. That's lame. So thanks for bringing that change. I have also noticed in others fanfics that hiccup always gets hurt, despite the fact that toothless would gladly act as his shield. It's only fair that toothless gets his share of injuries too. It seems everyone wants hiccup to get hurt in their stories. Sorry, I'm rambling on and on and not making much sense. Just please write more.

I love it! One thing that always gets to me is that Hiccup always lets Dagur go. Sure it worked out with Alvin in the series, but with Dagur? Locking him up didn't do anything but make things worse. Hiccup is too nice for anyone's good. Especially his own good.

Love the ending! It made me happy! XD

It made me cry for toothless.

I loved it! :) great work:)

This was an amazing story and you did a great job with it!

Darn, I should definitely get up to date before reading the Author's Notes. Stoick has to let Thornado go?!

As usual the story was awesome! I hope u get double trouble out soon

Great story! I cried when he left Thornado too. I heard that Alvin trained the screaming death to destroy those islands! And now I am realizing how random this review is! Hahaha cya!