Thank you for helping show and point out that the destruction of the mining town was not all Luke's fault. It was very irritating to me how none of the characters seemed to understand that it wasn't just Luke, there were other factors, Van, Ion, Scores...ect. I appreciate how you show this in your writing.

This was a really sweet, sad fanfic. Whether the events are real, I will find out in due time, if I continue the game. Its some really nice writing talent you have though.

[loud angry sobbing]

This fic was really, really wonderful. I usually do not like song fics, but this was just suburb. The language was beautiful, the characters were handled perfectly, and this is my otp, so naturally by the end of it all I was a mess of tears. Thank you so much for writing this wonderful, heartbreaking fic. 3

I love your writing style, so PLEASE write more Luke/Ion.

Though Sync/Ion would also be great. XD

Thanks for posting this awesome story!

I'm sorry but this didn't work for me. Your storytelling was all over the place, so that made it hard to follow. You abused the parentheses and italics. A little is fine for one fic, but this was overkill. And if you read the site publishing guidelines then you'll see that posting song lyrics, no matter how few you use, is not allowed. This would have been a nice read if it weren't so disjointed.