The underlying passion that we only ever got a glimpse of. Just lovely.

Okay, I cannot believe I never left a review on this.
I'm not sure of when I read from the first time, but let me tell you that this OS is one of the few that I really kept in a corner of my head because whow it's damn, damn, damn good. Years ago I even started translating it for my own benefit.
So I'm doing a rewatch of the show at the moment and I totally knew I would re-read this after watching episode 16 of season 5 and I'm sooo glad I did.
Your writing is really impressive. The dialogues are great because they are very realistic, I could literally hear their voices. The theme of Lisbon being more than fed up with Jane's actions, with his stubbornness and selfishness and enraging habit not to tell Lisbon things is extremely well handled, as well as the issue of Lorelei. I also loved the atmosphere, so dark and full of tension, but with some lines that make you crack a smile - oh, and I LOVED the sex scene which stops before it gets really serious. I'm not a huge fan of smut but that - just perfect.
Seriously, it's such good stuff, thank you so much for writing this. I could go on and on about all the things I liked. I don't read that many fanfics these days but this makes me want to read all of the other stories you wrote!

For some reason I must have missed this story when you posted it several years ago - what a shame! It’s absolutely intense, very much in character, and just beautiful! I loved each single line of it! And I would have loved to watch this on the show! Thanks to your writing I can imagine their “conversation” pretty easily though.
Hopefully you don’t give up on this fandom and keep writing instead!

So tough but nice.

You writers are so cruel to your readers that has to carry on soon ok. thank you for the read you are a very good writer and I hope you will carry on with these stories you have been writing. Thank you again

gripping. you are a spectacular writer.

Wow! The chemistry so intensely charged! So could have seen this happening! Excellent!

I laughed out loud when he told her she was so limber. :)

Wow, love the dialog! I was soo feeling with them! Well done! :)

Ok, this story is amazing. Really, really amazing. I absolutely loved it.
I adore the way you write, and especially how you write of them.
The idea is simply incredible.
Thank you so much for writing this.
mareear

This was an awesome fic! One of the best ones I have read in a long time. I'm so glad you decided to post this.

Oh my god, oh my god, where's the next chapter?! Please don't do this to me!lol Yesterday was Christmas, hold on to that spirit, update soon.

Funny thing is that I read one of your reviewers saying he/she would have loved seeing this on the show. Well, on my mind it just did!LOL A thousand times better than what sadistic Heller gave us so far and apparently will give us in the future!

Woah. That was amazing. And so hot when they finally gave in to each other. Loved their conversations, too...they really needed to get all of that out in the open. I'd love to see where they go from here.

Love.

Whoa. Intense.