Reviews for A Bit of a Complication |
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Ickypicky892 chapter 4 . 5/23/2015 Please continue? Plz |
Sissel Torikki chapter 5 . 7/6/2014 Da fuck is this marked as complete for :( |
XxPokeShipsxX chapter 5 . 3/16/2014 I think you should keep 3rd person perspective. I happen to like it. Also, I felt like trying when Matt left :O This is a totally great story though. I'm looking forward to another chapter. :) Good job :) |
WILLSOFUNNY chapter 5 . 3/2/2014 Great story i think you should do 3rd person for the story. Anyway please update soon |
CreatureHanstran chapter 5 . 2/22/2014 I think the story is fine, but maybe switching between 3 characters would be too much, maybe just stick to third person... I mean its up to you |
I should probably go outside chapter 1 . 2/9/2014 Dude I love your story, the,drama,the,emotion it's just amazing. Plus because I play so much saints row I can hear all the characters voices but those thoughts would be nothing without your brilliant writing. Please please could you continue this. |
CreatureHanstran chapter 4 . 2/8/2014 THE END?! NOOOOOO! *sigh* but the part with the news report I actually read it in Janes voice ha i play too much saints row, but write a sequel pleeease! Im begging! |
jesie chapter 3 . 12/31/2013 keep going i like this story |
CreatureHanstran chapter 3 . 12/26/2013 WHAT IS SHE PLANNING?! we will find out wont we... i like your shaundi in this story, in mine she is like a sister to my character... but then again my character is Johnnys sister... Great chapter, cant wait for the sequel of the story too :) |
CreatureHanstran chapter 2 . 12/26/2013 Cute i absolutely adore matt, he's just the cutest thing ever! |
akuma-neko-kage chapter 2 . 12/24/2013 OMG I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter |
CreatureHanstran chapter 1 . 12/24/2013 Ooh love it :) gonna read the next chapter now |