Such a shame this story seems to be dead, it is an interesting plot

First review ever, Seems like a good plot but due to the grammer I didn't get past the prologue.

Your grammar sucks ass

please update it a great story

Awesome story. Please continue

the GRAMMAR, THE FUCKING GRAMMAR!

nice updat soon

You were not kidding about the bad grammar thing. It's a good premise and the storyline is fine but I just can't with the grammar. Get a beta and your fics could be really good.

Hey. I was wondering if I could help fix up the grammar for this story? Please get back.

You grammar cause of is not read I am

Yay im glad to find this story again its one of my all time favorites you actually put together a good enrapturing story and keep people's attention you have my gratitude for this

Just read bio, I like wth is that that op as hell

well this my first review for any story i ever read on this website by ever i mean from the last year. so you can you story i awesome and i like the concept too . but i will be more fruitfull if you make beelzebub-sama and sizune relation to be more deep . just think about it both of them are heartless tool . so i find more resemblance in those two .
and they have more thing in common than any other high school dxd character. so they understand each other better that an one else .
well sayonara

Plz update

You really should get all the grammatical errors corrected. There are so many errors in the chapters.