Reviews for The Ghost of Christmas Present
koshina chapter 1 . 4/6/2018
Well written. but pity you took away everything anyone else ever did right in potter universe. I am not much fan of God Severus and Goddess Hermione and everyone else is part of the band of babbling bumbling baboons kind of plots.
sunsethill chapter 1 . 9/28/2017
I never could figure out why Dumbledore didn't warn Harry and/or Hermione more fully what was coming. Even if he figured Harry would have to die, he wanted him to survive long enough to find the horcruxes. Harry was too trusting. He trusted Dumbledore to prepare him, and instead spent a year getting information. Hermione did a pretty good job preparing, but forgetting things like food would not have happened if she had shared information also, I don't think. I've always thought Hermione and Dumbledore were similar. Nice job having Snape help her prepare in this!
Layla chapter 1 . 8/1/2017
amazing
Broadwayfreak5357 chapter 1 . 7/17/2017
This was a lovely read/one shot! Thanks for posting! I'm so glad to have read this. I'd like to think it's canon too - Hermione was always very smart, intuitive and prepared! :)
flight9 chapter 1 . 2/12/2017
Oh could you continue this story please?
Readerjkr chapter 1 . 12/20/2016
Nice story. Great last line.
Light on the Horizon chapter 1 . 9/11/2016
Great story!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/23/2016
Nope. Those books about Horcruxes were all gathered at Dumbledores private library.
When he died, Hermione just tried, "Accio, books about Horcruxes", and they all did come to her.
Bananaphobia chapter 1 . 2/13/2016
That was great!
LittleBabyDamien chapter 1 . 6/10/2015
An interesting interpretation. And the Author's Note is pure gold!
EpilogueLover chapter 1 . 3/13/2015
Well done! Very good fleshing out on such a vague idea. No wonder this "Loten" fella could not have done it, only you! _ I guess it's just meant to be. Brilliant.
mama123 chapter 1 . 1/28/2015
That was really nice. Very normal and real.
teishamarie chapter 1 . 1/21/2015
Looooved it! Thanks for posting!
Watchwoman chapter 1 . 1/4/2015
Lovely. I liked the idea of Hermione pouring over survival resources, realizing that something is going to happen. I can imagine her frustration too, at not knowing exactly what's going to happen and therefore, not feeling that she's ever covering the right topics.
An enjoyable read, thank you.
loving-reader-and-writer chapter 1 . 10/10/2014
This is lovely! I love his thoughts on her and that she drew conclusions that others hadn't because she didnt live in a fluffy world. Id love this to become a long story. I would read it all. You write very well.
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