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it was very touching and good. i know this was like published in 2002 but you might want to think about changing Aerith's role to Tifa's bcos that was the answer in kh2.

wow that was really good. Very different from the ones that I have read that was about Cloud trying to look for his light (Aerith.

wow. the very first kingdom hearts fanfic and itsnot yaoi. it was very cute.

wow~! I really loved how you wrote this! Eventhough i'm REALLY not a fan of cloudxaerith , the last chapter was SO meaningful! thank you very much for writing this!

Very good story. It was just like being in Cloud's mind!

Do you want to get nabbed by the police?

Lol, sorry. Love it, but do write more. Thanks.

Hey, this was good! Very nice, really captured what could have been going through Cloud's mind.
:) !

This is, and I am VERY confident of it, the best Kingdom Hearts fanfic about Cloud and his quest, and how he got to where he is. Excellent.

beautiful just beautiful

yay! - A happy ending!

Yay! you finally updated! and finished...yeah cloud don't give up! you will find aerith in the end! (hint hint) _

CAcutest couple ever _

OOS

u finally updated

hehe dat wus gud haha

hope u update very soon again

hehe till da next update

peaceout

great 1 thing wrong... its all about tifa why aerith and i would like to say that it is pronounced (air-iss) aeris i would say my name but a fan fic like this doesnt deserve my name but it was alright

Nice! And now it's finished... Perhaps you can make some more LOK fanfics! _ This was good! Keep up the good work!

Awwwwww... I luv this fic! Cloud and Aerith fics rule! Keep going, I can't wait for more!