Cute!

"There's been an explosion in a banana ripening warehouse?"

"Let's split!"

(Sorry, couldn't resist)

Oh shame, Poor, poor Alan. :-)

Great story! :)

Haha oh Alan is so clumsy, that was so funny I could just imagine that happening! Trust Scott to go mother hen on John haha and Gordon was just, well Gordon! Brilliant fun, as always I loved it! :D

Now that was good I expected John to have a heart attack or something but he was so calm over it. Great job xxxx

Haha. One word for this - Amused and Hilarious. Actually that's two :)
But I'm loving your work, it's all so amusing. I've read it three times and I swear I laugh louder every time :D Just like your other stuff

I totally absolutely love this! A starring role for my blond favourite, John and the other blond being made to look a idiot on Five. Gordon's idea of waking up Virgil made me howl with laughter, it's my five year olds favourite trick to wake us up and he hurts like hell landing there. I shudder to think how much a grown man landing there hurts! Poor Virgil!
Lovely story, keep up the great work xx