| Reviews for Naruto Potter |
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   Night22Shadows chapter 13 . 10/8/2019 And I was really liking how this story was going. I hope you come back to this one soon so I can see where you're going to take it. |
| Mend1cant Bias chapter 8 . 8/10/2019 Annoying to read. Too many crossovers |
| XenoLucifer chapter 3 . 2/19/2019 Atleast restrict it to fucking 9 followers for each tail of the kyuubi you twat, let's see some more problems with this story, Naruto is so ooc that he can't be called Naruto anymore. Naruto has a huuuuge superiority complex, Voldemort has one basilisk? well Naruto has 3, The Malfoys are rich? well Naruto has a vault overflowing with money (which totally fucks up the economy system), your Naruto is not only op as in super strong but he's like more intelligent than anyone else on the planet, he's also like the supreme overlord over everything as he just casually summons his "servants" when people annoy himahem*pussy*ahemnone of the story makes sense. Abilities: Super intelligent, has all the experience and Jutsu of several high ranking leaf shinobi including Jiraiya, Sarutobi Hiruzen and Kakashi, was trained by Orochimaru, fused with the kyuubi (though somehow the kyuubi is still alive and female, someone obviously thought with their dick and not brain), capable of wandless magic, Super rich(not really a super power I know but look at Bruce Wayne). do I need to say more? oh yeah, he has a Harem and every girl he meet fall for him instantly, not to mention you casually flex how great he is by having people like Ron fall for one of his harem girls. People that actually like this chaotic clusterfuck of a story need to get their brains checked. Oh, and this, all of these faults are seen within the first 1 1/2 chapters. |
| XenoLucifer chapter 2 . 2/19/2019 What an annoying story... be more subtle. |
| XenoLucifer chapter 1 . 2/19/2019 Why would he tell Dumbles about this? are you saying he already have the wizard world under his thumb? I wish it would be him accessing his parents vault instead... and no basilisk eggs, maybe he could befriend the basilisk at school instead, I mean, the story feels too easy, there are no consequences to his actions, like he just threatened Dumbledore of all people. |
| Monster King chapter 13 . 11/1/2018 Great story please continue it soon I enjoyed it |
| Tsukoblue chapter 13 . 8/21/2018 Please update this and the Please Naruto stories or rewrite them |
| Kevin chapter 13 . 6/23/2018 More plese |
| Monster King chapter 11 . 6/4/2018 Great story I really liked it good job writing the story please continue it soon. |
| Mime-Andromeda-Benetsnach chapter 7 . 5/24/2018 Monogatari, DxD y Fairy Tail |
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/9/2018 la suite de naruto potter |
| Eternity456 chapter 13 . 1/26/2018 Oh my gosh your stories are amazing please update |
| F.D chapter 13 . 1/14/2018 Your story has a very interesting concept behind it and your writing abilities, primarily around grammar and vocabulary, are pretty good. My only advice would be to try slowing down a bit. In a rush to reach your objective, you tend to skip all the smaller details along the way that make a story interesting. You ended up dismissing the entire second year with a small explanation. It is, of course, your story and thus your own choice, but I do feel that devoting more time to explaining and giving details would really bring your story to life. Regardless, your work has been far from bad, so congratulations! |
| Lord Asmodeus chapter 1 . 5/9/2017 ...The premise is brilliant, but the execution is wantonly lacking. It's cringe-worthy in its chaos. |
| piddle chapter 13 . 2/12/2017 good chapters |
