That was beautiful I loved it :) Funny thing is I was listening to Ed Sheeran's 'kiss me' and imagained a scene very similar. I think the song suits them and this scene so well, like "I'm falling for your eyes, but they don't know me yet". Think that suits Doctor and River very well :)

I love it, it's wonderful I love the way you capture river, it's just her and I love it

Aww. This was cute.

Oh, this is so them. And the fact that River didn't even miss a step... Brilliant.

Awwh. Just beautiful. I'm telepathically sending you rainbow unicorns and fluffiness.

Ah, nicely done! And on with the dancing.

Oh so lovely and fun! I adore that they never broke apart, but River just handling it like just brushing the lapels of his coat.

Good story .sweet and funny at the same time. All the characters seem real . nice work.

I favorited this story... Do I really have to comment on the wonderfull perfectness of this fic? ;)