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Guest chapter 2 . 5/18/2019 the horrible grammar hurts my eyes .. |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/18/2019 I really want to read this since it really seems like a good idea. But the lack of punctuation drives me nuts, commas exist for a reason, use them! |
laydeedunk chapter 23 . 9/1/2016 It was a great story over all. I loved the dynamics and the drama that was given. However, the last 2 chapters made Sakura seem very unreasonable and hot tempered, especially as kakashi was trying to explain himself. It was frustrating to read that she wouldn't even give him a 2nd thought or allow him to say anything. |
Guest chapter 6 . 4/29/2015 Business* |
Guest chapter 2 . 10/8/2014 Loved the plot and everything, but the grammar is horrible! Phrases like "I and Tsunade", "Sasuke sighted after hearing out" aren't correct and also Naruto wouldn't say "What a miracle to see you here". I'm sorry if I'm being too critical and I know it's your story, but if it were me I'd want to know what I can improve. Again loved the plot though! |
Korymenei chapter 23 . 8/23/2014 It was a pleasure to read, I'm happy that in the end they found their way back to each other. I look forward to reading your stories in the future. |
mizucb chapter 23 . 7/24/2014 Just finished this story and it is absolutely one of my favorite kaka saku stories. I love how Sakura is portrayed as a strong, independent and confident woman. Pace and development of the story is just right. I truly enjoyed reading this. Thank you! |
Pyro-Misa chapter 23 . 6/5/2014 Lovely, a bit on the cliche side in some parts, but I really did like it. Keep up the great work! |
Grlybrainiac chapter 1 . 5/11/2014 This is your first fanfic? It's good so far! *keeps reading* ;) |
funkirican chapter 23 . 4/23/2014 This was a really great story, been reading it four about four hours. Time well spent! |
xzzz chapter 23 . 4/20/2014 Aww. It ended |
angel897 chapter 23 . 4/22/2014 interesting story to read love this paring |
joys chapter 23 . 4/20/2014 Great work. I've really enjoyed this story. |
harvestangel99 chapter 23 . 4/20/2014 Adorabubble! |
miyako89 chapter 22 . 4/15/2014 Tsunade should thank Kakashi for making Sakura taking all her vacation days. ;) Well, hope it will work out between those two. They deserve it. |