Aaa my heart almost broken when i read the begining (/_;) so lucky that was just a dream...i almost crying when i read about chiaki anxiety (‸)
I love hatori and chiaki story but their story is very rare,love this story~~ ()/

This is an interesting start. I would love to see it finished. It's a shame that there are more for this pairing being written.

I want to mention too, I love the accuracy you seemed to strive for with the medical process, I am sure you put a lot of effort into this and I promise it shows!

this has all been very sweet, thank you for writing! i am not sure if it is too late to hope for a continuation but um, really, I thought this was all very wonderful (though sad aaaaaaaaaaaaaa)

AAAGHH! You scared me at the beginning, you big jerk! :-( I'm so glad it was just a dream! XD I'm just waiting for Tori to find out about Chiaki's illness but I'm worried that even though he said he'd be with Chiaki forever he might feel differently later. Chiaki is so sweet, he deserves to be happy! :'''( I really like the fluffy parts!

This was so wonderfully written I loved it! I'm hoping maybe one day you'll continue 3

Please continue, I hope he tells hatori

Your Engilsh is almost perfect, but it's still amazing! Anyways I love this book and I'll be waiting for the next update! _

I'm crying and we haven't even gotten to Chiaki telling Tori, though I'm sure Tori isn't buying it went fine no worries act.

Wow. And I mean wow in the best sort of way. Domestica is my fave couple (because I relate the most with Chiaki) but be careful not to break my heart Cagallirocks! Im sensitive. But also excited! So keep up the good work! Cant wait for the next update!

Man, I thought he had Multiple Sclerosis or something! This will be interesting to read, thanks for uploading! And when he called him Yoshiyuki at the end...so cute! :)

Poor Chiaki! He needs to tell Tori. He won't die from this right.

I want to know what happens next. Update soon xx

I'm so happy you keep writing this story ! I read the third chapter right after you published it but, I am sorry, I didn't have the time to comment that day... And I kept forgetting... Gomen ! Anyway, I hope that Chiaki And Hatori will interact more in the next chapters. Thank you again for the update, this was a good chapter. And I apologize for any kind of mistake, english is not my first language.

AAAAAAGH! You left it at a cliff-hanger! X-O *dies* I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Good job! :D