Um... Randy Butternubs and Prin Sess? *snort*

Really enjoyed this story. I couldn't stop reading so thank you for writing such a mesmerizing story.

Fabulous story, well written, in character, and with an intriguing plot. I loved it. Thanks so much for sharing your work, keep writing!

I've read this over at psychfic but couldn't review. I love your characterization and dialogue in your fic, and am part way through the sequel. Thank you for writing!

dun-dun-dun! *dramatic music here*

So there's going to be a second story eh? Awesome! And I can't wait to find out the secret of the painting because I honestly can't imagine what it could be...

PLEASE RESPOND THROUGH YOUR NEXT CHAPTER JUST LIKE IN UR END PARAGRAPH THINGY. IM STARTING A FANFIC AND I NEED AN IDEA. PLEASE RESPOND! BTW I'M LOVING THIS!

Awwwwww is there really only one more chapter? I love this story sooooooooo much! Please update like the wind! Don't leave me hangin'!

Yay Rye got taken down! But it never seems to end with them. Stupid Potter being so prepared. But it does make for a good story. I got the feeling that she has some sort of inside man but idk.

Well Buzz and Henry were going to save him at least. Rye must be a really good fighter to beat two people at once. But the detectives are right there with guns! And Shawn is somewhere that is not his bed so I'm not sure what's up with that. Hopefully that means he won't be getting choked anymore because that can't be fun.

Great now Henry is either going to get hit too or he will save the day. I'm gonna go with save the day. Because that's a more pleasant option. But if it comes to a fight, I'm not sure how well Henry will fare while in a hospital gown...
I wonder what it is that the Detectives have to drop off for Buzz. At least they're headed back to the hospital. They'll definitely be able to stop Rye. Probably. And it seemed like you were kind of hinting Gus might head back to the hospital as well. So maybe Gus will be the knight in shining armor!:D

Oh no now he got to Buzz! And I was really hoping that he would be helpful to Shawn's predicament.
And I liked how worried Shawn was about Henry. I guess I'm just a sucker for their relationship, especially when they start getting all worried and show that they truly do love each other. Aw it's just so cute

I am so so so so so sorry. At least I'm reviewing now! Just ignore the fact that I'm about a month late.
Anywhoo this was another great chapter. The continuation of Henry and to an extent Buzz's hatred of the hospital gowns made me smile. And Shawn is going to be okay for now. But then Rye is coming and probably for Shawn so that may be a problem. But then I think the painting is with Henry and that room would be easier to get into so I'm thinking that's what will happen.

Are you getting your chapter titles from song lyrics? So far I've seen "Somewhere only we know", "Breakeven" and I think "The middle".

Ya know I think that with enough revising and editing this could actually be published! It's really good!