OMG so no Happy EndingFor Bree

I’m amazed! Wow! Really need to read the A/N not sure if this is based on a real movie LOL because I’ll want to watch it . Loved it!

I just started the story today! And I’m impressed. Can’t stop reading.

An amazing story! I loved watching Edward and Bella fall in love!

I had to stop reading as soon as I begun reading this chapter... WHAT THE FUCK!

You kissed a dude, when you had Edward in the same fucking building, probably not even 10 yards away from you, and you expect for him to react normally?

I gotta take a break... until the last two chapters, it's been pretty ok read, a little over dramatic here and there.. but this takes the cake..

First off, Being friends with someone you had previous romantic intanglments with just doesn't fucking work.

AND SECOND, why in the fuck would she fucking kiss him? I read the reviews before I choose to comment... And they all hope Edward doesn't over react? What the fuck? Her and Edward have OBVIOUS feelings for each other and opening up more and more to each other..

Why in the blue hell would she give a guy a 'goodbye' kiss'? With Edward in the same fucking building no less.

I feel like this was forced onto the characters by the writer, in other words. You are MAKING YOUR OWN CHARACTERS ACT OOC! Go fucking figure.. Bella would not fucking kiss him giving how the story has been developing.

And on the sexual assault stuff, 'cope' by coming forward, you are no longer talking about Edward, so therefore, come forward and put that motherfucker in jail.

Fuck the public and 'large number of people', you are choosing to let a rapist roam free by not going to the police so they can run a rape kit on you and get his or her dna off of you so he can be put in jail.

I realize people react differently, but one SHOULD never not go to the police. The longer you wait, the less of a chance he has to be put behind bars.

Is Heidi his former Domme?

Truly a great story!

Poor Edward!

I’ve enjoyed reading this background!

Interesting insight into Carlisle’s life.

I loved this story! Thanks for sharing.

Seems like Heidi was playing them against each other.

Guess Heidi didn’t learn her lesson!

Great chApter!