This chapter you refer to a "twin bed" , yet chapter one says tony's new "king size bed"
Enjoyable story though

I sure hope that you plan on updating this sometime soon. I absolutely loved it so far.

Who's Chip Sterling?

I'm happy you're back! I can't wait to read the next chapter!

OK, my Mossad theory is buried, maybe I watch too much TV shows... :D I have never suspected it might be him! Good idea with this, to bring out some old enemy! Very smart. As for the chapter - wonderful one, those two are so happy in love that my heart sings with joy! Thanks for it and can't wait for the other ones. :) And by the way - hope your granddaughter is fine already, it seems that it's still returning to her. Damn ear infections and poor little baby...

I thought only one was the man who wanted to destroy TIVA completely... And this man was Ray... I must say that I'am a little disappointed that it isn't Ray... It would havbeen more interesting,but hey this your story...
I can't wait for the next update..

great engagement, I love the ring.
damn chipper is out to cause trouble. maybe tony and ziva will shoot him

Definitely not who I expected. Very nice plot twist, though.

Liked it! More pls. Thx.

Oh my! Why this crazy dude!
He's going after Abby too!
Are you trying to kill me or what? :)
Well, hope your baby be OK!
And welcome back!

Hope the bad guy doesn't get away with anything...

can't wait to read more and see what happens next with our favorite couple

That is my favorite song when sung by Elvis. Another great chapter and loved the first date especially the proposal. Beautiful! The cliffhanger was a great touch. All I can say is thank you and keep writing. Fantastic!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! NOOOO! Who's they guy in black, why does he hate Tiva?!

Who's this antagonist? I thought all of them who were hunting for ziva before were dead?

Do update soon