very interesting setting about the two vampire sister and i hope to see your further chapter!

This story needs to be edited. So many typographical errors. You should re-read this or find a beta reader. Also, I think this went too fast. The "witch/vampire people" were just so sudden and I kinda got lost in the story. I wasn't sure what was happening half the time.

Anyway, hope you can keep my interest! I do love reading Elsanna fics. :)

this needs to continue

Great story, please update soon. Thank you

Those witch, people, things? Anyway, they'd better not mess up Elsanna relationship. I will screw them up if they do. Grrrr

I'll look over the story and fix spelling errors if you'd like. Got nothing else to do

You might want to go over this again, or have someone else do it. I tried counting the typos, but I ran out of fingers and toes ...

Other than that, I was quite happy to see a story that focuses so strongly on the guilt aspect of the ship.

Plot twist! Are you going to continue the story? I really like it :3 (although there were a few spelling errors; they were small tho)