I really enjoyed this quick peak into Bella's mind about the transition into vampirehood. It makes sense that she transitions very fast and with relative ease, as she seemed to desperately want to be a vampire since book one. I think you captured her satisfaction at being a vampire well; there's a layer of disdain and detachment in humanity that I found fascinating. Although this would make an interesting longer fic, I do appreciate the punch it packs by being so short. Great fic :)

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