Reviews for The Price of Failure
Bella119 chapter 12 . 5/21/2018
Gripping perfect story thank you
cma1 chapter 12 . 8/25/2017
Excellent story. You captured the essence of Murdock perfectly.
carinims01 chapter 12 . 6/29/2017
This was absolutely fantastic. Thank you so so much for sharing. I loved every bit of it, and I adored the friendship moments Murdock had with the team afterwards. It was all very in character and I loved every bit of it.
RobinRedoe chapter 12 . 1/29/2017
This was such a good story. Thanks for sharing it. I read it in one go! I loved how you wrote the characters (both A-team and Clemente) and felt so sorry for Murdock. But it was good fortune that the team found him in time. The story never lost pace and was interesting from begin to end. So good :D
Hattie J Huper chapter 8 . 11/25/2016
Loving this story. Gripping stuff
AppleSpongeCake chapter 12 . 8/4/2016
This was a beautiful, heartbreaking, masterpiece of a fic. I'm so glad to have read it. You are a terrific author, and I hope to see more Murdock fics from you.
Wildfire's Flame chapter 12 . 5/30/2016
I loved the story. I felt bad for the team And Murdock. Great story. Keep up the awesome work.
nomdeplume30 chapter 12 . 8/27/2014
This was a fabulous story. I loved how you got into everyone's heads at different points. And your characterizations were perfect. I liked how you portrayed Decker in this. It was a great moment when he talked to Hannibal at the van. You really did an amazing job with this story. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Hannah Lynn McDonald chapter 12 . 7/11/2014
*claps*

*stands and continues to clap*

Bravo! Bravo.

An extremely well done story. Suspenseful, but not too graphic. The characters were well done, and the ending was perfect.

My absolute favorite part was the dream-you did a magnificent job with that. Do you mind if I use that scene/idea/dialogue in a poem?

Thank you so much for this story, I enjoyed it.
Hannah Lynn McDonald chapter 11 . 7/11/2014
Hopefully he plans to try to fight...

And looking back on that, I've been watching too much telly...
Hannah Lynn McDonald chapter 9 . 7/11/2014
Why couldn't he have crashed OVER the fence line...
Hannah Lynn McDonald chapter 8 . 7/11/2014
*grins and rubs hands together*

I absolutely LOVE those two characters!
Hannah Lynn McDonald chapter 6 . 7/11/2014
Rats...And here i was half hoping I would be wrong...

Apparently I'm a better guesser than I thought!

And define 'getting to Murdock on time'. On time to save him from going completely, absolutely, uselessly crazy? Oh, definitely. On time to prevent tons of 'reconditioning'? Probably not so much...
Hannah Lynn McDonald chapter 5 . 7/11/2014
Well, I certainly would bet any money, expensive items, or items with sentimental value on the outcome as my luck is about as good as the likelihood of the A Team wrapping up a case with no property damage.

However, I would probably bet on Clemente for Round One as my luck also isn't good enough that Murdock would escape. Also, there are twelve chapters left. And we haven't met Phebes yet.

Now to see if I'm right...
Hannah Lynn McDonald chapter 3 . 7/11/2014
Well, as long as no one goes up with him, Murdock can take the plane up high and then just fly away!
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