Was good to the last chapter crappy ending

What an interesting story! I truly enjoyed it however I would've added in scene breaks as it was difficult to know when time had passed as the conversation seemed to trail together.

This was a truly wonderful start to this story and I can't wait to read more! I was just saying that I thought I'd read all the good HP/SG crossover and here you are proving me wrong!

Hey, doofus! Biceps are in your arms, not your legs! Unless they replaced his arms as well as his legs he can't have storage compartments in his biceps!

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Noooo. Not the house elves!

The name of the store in Knockturn Alley is Borgin (singular, no s) and Burkes (with an e on the end before the s). You know it's really easy to look this stuff up online if you don't know how to spell it.

"40x speed of light" 10LY a minute" Ehrm, what? It takes light one year to go one light year. So these two numbers don't compute for me.

40x speed of light would be one lightyear every 9,1 days.

10LY a minute would be 5.256.000x speed of light, if I'm not completely miss remembering.

If 40x speed of light is correct, it would take them 75 thousand years (27 309 100 days) to get to the Pegasus galaxy, if 10LY a minute is correct it would tak them 208 days to get to the Pegasus galaxy, that is an error by an order of magnitude of 5.

There are 5 256 000 minutes in 10 year, as a light year is the distance light travels in a year, traveling 10LY would take light 10 years (5,256,000 minutes), as it is stated that it takes one minute to travel 10LY it should be 5,256,000 times faster than the speed of light. I'm tired, so I included how I came to the answer in a rambling way.

Alright, finished this last night but didn't had time to leave a comment. First I must say that I found the use of magic mostly too small and boring, I had expected a super!Harry using magical ships that can easily go against Asgard or something. The real thing I had a problem with though was the lack of proper scene breakers. Every single time you change scenes there is no indication whatsoever, it's not until something happens that classes against what was going on in the previous or last few paragraphs that you understand months or years have suddenly passed and this is another place, scene, or plot altogether. That's something that needs to be fixed.

"The Portdrive wasn't as user-friendly as the hyperdrive of the Goa'uld transportation vessel Harry unearthed, with all the unpleasant side-effects of Portkey travel present, but it worked much faster than the existing hyperdrives. It was estimated that Portdrives made the ship travel forty times the speed of light." That's actually extremely slow. A standard Ha'tack can reach 32000 times c, while Apophis ship is even faster. Asgard and Ancient go million of times c. 40c is literally crawling through space by Stargate universe standards.

I rarely find a story with an ending that part of me regrets reading that story. I think part of the problem is giving meaningful challenges to a super harry, but mostly it's the unsatisfying ending. there is so little detail to harry's remaining time in this universe and with so little shown purpose it leaves a very unsatisfying ending.

Great story , enjoyed every moment of it , thank you .

This was an exelent piece of work and a really great ending

Study overwatch and massefect and The libaryn (not proper grammar.) then take this story and mix in that stuff when Harry is makeing his secret organization/libary to create an alternative dimension to this fiction.

I enjoyed this story, but, I've always been of the opinion that "The Avengers" was actually Harry, who traveled back through time and become a royal P.I.T.A. of the 'snakes'. That's where the emblem of the Avengers came about. It was Harry's scar. Then, after some time fighting, he would return to his 'present time' to continue the battle to rid the galaxy of their kind.
Also, the reason neither Harry nor the ascended could not find the answer, was that only The Creator knows that answer; but, He does not necessarily care so much about their 'destination' as He does the journey (we) all take getting there. Harry and the ascended couldn't find the answer because they jumped off the path He set for them. They have to get back on that path, to continue the real journey. Then and only then would they find the answers they're all looking for.

Thank you.