Can I just say your English is way better than my French! And the story is really, really enjoyable; really good; intense, passionate with strong characterisation. Hope you can continue it soon. Best regards, JandB

How did I miss this!? Ugh I suck...this story is so good...beyond apologize for being AWOL! This chp was so goooood...the suspense...the action...the emotions of Ron and Hermione- she loves her man more than life as does he love Hermione more than life. Their conversation was so freakin sad but so beautiful too.

Again 1000000 apologies for missing this and hope you update more soon!

Good job on the further I read, the better you get in your English!

can't wait to read more. too good!

AHHHH how did I miss this? so sorry!

Ok thank goodness for Luna!

Ron killed me here- Hermione is trying to do what is going to stop these killings but to the risk of her own life- Ron can't take that. The one thing that I loved about Ron is his love for Hermione. But the most obvious thing about Ron is his one weakness: losing Hermione...
Hermione is so brave but I don't want her to get hurt either...
Please update more soon! I promise to read on time lol

What's the likelihood that they will actually have a calm conversation :-) hopefully it will turn out okay. Great job!

Omg I at first thought it was Lucinda (hate her too like Hermione does)...Daphne? Did Daphne imperious Seamus and Neville?
Hermione is not 100%-how will she escape?

Ron get to your girl now!

I had a feeling Ron would be more than angry with his stubborn witch...but Hermione is Hermione-she loves her Ron and will do everything to protect him.
Ron broke my heart when he said Hermione is his life and his oxygen :'( of course we know he would die without her which is why he is so angry about her placing her life in danger. But I really do believe that Hermione would sacrifice her life for Ron-case in point Malfoy Manor-I really believe Hermione held on as long as she could because she knew Ron would be next :( again Hermione needs to realize that Ron needs her and to quote Ron "wouldn't last 2 days without her".
Update more soon!

Ahhhh what happened to Hermione!
The one thing I always admired and loved about Hermione was her stubbornness (same with Ron's stubbornness too) but this is one time I wish she would have listened to the love of her life! :'(

Ohhh Ron loves her so much! Hermione knows her Ron-he is loyal to no end and she loves him more than life like he does her.

What is the parchment?
Good job with quotes :) was easier to follow.
Look forward to an update!

Action big time!
I love how R/Hr just love each other and worry for each other!
My only criticism is don't use dashes but quotes. Otherwise this sounds very promising!

Your story had a very good ploy, and was written very well in terms of the characters personality,plot, structure etcetera.

The only thing that put me off, was the way you wrote your dialogue:
Ron, when talking to Hermione, sounded a bit awkward, and weird.
And also, when you began your dialogue, they would have a _ in front of it! which made it confusing for me.

But if you fix those up, this would make a brilliant story- I Joe you update soon.