Reviews for The First
StarlingChild4 chapter 1 . 12/23/2019
Beautiful. I love each of Kristoff's "firsts," leading up to the sweetest one of all: his first time with Anna. Very sweet and adorable and heartfelt story :')
Anonymous chapter 1 . 7/13/2015
This is very good! I like their style of conversation!
twlightbella chapter 1 . 12/1/2014
Anna and Kristoff make love on their honeymoon
Fantastiggerisch chapter 1 . 5/17/2014
Perfect. Thanks for this lovely chapter!
NeverLookBack756 chapter 1 . 3/1/2014
This was really good, oh my goodness I loved it! You should be proud! Keep up the good work!
AnnaJayBelle chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
I. Love. This. I particularly love, love, love the ending line. Perfection. Thanks so much for writing this. And have a wonderful day.
-AnnaJayBelle
mary chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
omg i absolutely loved this! PLEASE write a story on how anna finds out shes pregnant and has the baby! PLEASE thank you :D
Cassio chapter 1 . 1/8/2014
I really liked it, although I wish you could have described their first time in more detail. All the build-up for that moment, and then you go over it on the surface... I hope you write more about these two. This was very nice! ;)
HAFanForever chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
Beautifully done! You did so well at capturing the strength of the love in their relationship, especially now that they are married. And with their first time...well, let's just say I think you did so well in putting true love and passion in the intimacy their shared together on their first night together as a married couple. Yes, these two are so lucky to have found each other, truly love each other through and through, and through thick and thin, until the end, they will always be there for each. Yay for Kristoff and Anna! :D
Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2013
Omahgawd that was amazing! So cute, and so romantic! You have a gift :)
Elsa Frost chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
SO ROMANTIC
UPDATE PLEASE
KEEP CALM AND FREEZE ON
ELSA FROST
Guest chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
I would LOVE a Sequel!
LooneyLockhart chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
so, so cute! I love it so much(:
LoveThis chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
Continue? I love this we should get some babies in here! :)
creatorX33 chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
So fluffy, and hooooooooooooot!
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