Reviews for The First |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful. I love each of Kristoff's "firsts," leading up to the sweetest one of all: his first time with Anna. Very sweet and adorable and heartfelt story :') |
![]() ![]() This is very good! I like their style of conversation! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Anna and Kristoff make love on their honeymoon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perfect. Thanks for this lovely chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really good, oh my goodness I loved it! You should be proud! Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I. Love. This. I particularly love, love, love the ending line. Perfection. Thanks so much for writing this. And have a wonderful day. -AnnaJayBelle |
![]() ![]() omg i absolutely loved this! PLEASE write a story on how anna finds out shes pregnant and has the baby! PLEASE thank you :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked it, although I wish you could have described their first time in more detail. All the build-up for that moment, and then you go over it on the surface... I hope you write more about these two. This was very nice! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautifully done! You did so well at capturing the strength of the love in their relationship, especially now that they are married. And with their first time...well, let's just say I think you did so well in putting true love and passion in the intimacy their shared together on their first night together as a married couple. Yes, these two are so lucky to have found each other, truly love each other through and through, and through thick and thin, until the end, they will always be there for each. Yay for Kristoff and Anna! :D |
![]() ![]() Omahgawd that was amazing! So cute, and so romantic! You have a gift :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() SO ROMANTIC UPDATE PLEASE KEEP CALM AND FREEZE ON ELSA FROST |
![]() ![]() I would LOVE a Sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() so, so cute! I love it so much(: |
![]() ![]() Continue? I love this we should get some babies in here! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() So fluffy, and hooooooooooooot! |