I like this story!

yami should have give yugi a collar not a necklace

I know the story is old but I love that comment:

"Where are you?"

Everywhere

XD

Mmmmm mmmmm well it was an interesting story. It ended up funny and sweet.

Oh the parents are so mean. Yugi hasnt met the father. They could have just explained everything to the kid since the very beginning. Yami would have been and protector. Yugi wouldn't feel he is crazy and he would have two parents

Mmm mmm mmm. I you kudos for the funny parts.

Ah great, mother. You just tell me I am to be married to the creep that appeared today at school and gave me a jewell. Really? I mean yami ended up being sweet but he did everything wrong. He almost killed yugi's friends.

Okay yes yami is evil here. The story is a creepy romance. And I thought yugi didn't know because his parents died but apparently they just hid everything from him

This is getting good. Will Anzu betray Yugi or not? Especially when she wants him too.

I am all for the dance for seduction but that was almost rape which is a no no for me. I mean he is demon but I wish he could draw a line to taking yugi by force

Haha as if it wasn't hard to work with a simple demon popping out of nowhere and claiming you, talking in your mind, and driving you crazy, this said demon is half a vampire half an incubus.

Possessive demon. I am sure from yugi's perspective it is creepy as Hell but knowing yami I wish I was sworn to him too

That was dark and mysterious with touches of cuteness.

God, I love Joey.

The EVIL NECKLACE! *dramatic, horrified gasp* OH, NO!

The whole "We. Are. Virgins." part just cracked me up. Bravo!