I really loved this story! omg..you did a great job! :3

great

I was so enjoying the storyline, then you had to ruin it by writing in first person. I really detest reading first person. I have already skipped every first person perspective chapter I have come across and do not wish to try and fill in the holes when I finally find the next piece so I'm just stopping now. Such a pity, it was so good until that.

Excellent story so far. I'll leave a proper review once I finish.

I can't believe I haven't reveiwed this fic. I mean I love it. I've read it. I am reading the sequel and reviewing that one, so I must have just forgotten to review here.

I really like this story. I like a lot of the fantastical elements you have in it. I have to admit I am a Sally/Wufei fan. But this story is fun enough without it although the pervert in my wouldn't mind some threesome action (nor do I think Treize would mind LOL).

This is still a good story and I am happy you shared it with us.

This was completely enrapturing, honestly, I couldn't stop reading. All the subtelties of the story woven, and the characterization is amazing. An excellent job.

this has to be the greatest fanfict i have ever read!

poor wu

I'm not even half way through, but I just HAD to comment. Treize is bastard, but he's that's bad guy you love to hate.

"He's trying to seduce Wufei"

That was great, and at just the right time too. You gave all the hints, and Sally was going through the whole denile thing and since it was in her pov it was very subtley done. Congrats.

I have read very few fics that deal with Wufie doubting his wife. Usually he lets her go, embracing her idiology. This shows just how strained their marriage was and how not ready both them were for it. Him physically forcing his views on her and she not being able to articulate herself well. Shows their immaturity.

This fic is absolutely wonderful. Each twist shows just how evil Treize really is, and I can't help but appreciate just how much thought when into writing this...

Onto the next chapter

I gave up sleep (on a school night, no less!) to finish reading this. what more can I say? :)

please do the sequal!

please update!

I have been reading this story practically nonstop since I found it, which is why you don't have an extra twenty reveiws right now. SO speaking, I was utterly blown away by this fic. Your renditions of the characters personas was stunning and the details I got to read were all nicely done. The idea of having it in Sally's pov was a stroke of genius too.

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The plot and how everything turned out was just-gah! I was very surprised at some of the twists that your fic took, and I couldn't just let myself be satisfied with one chapter at a time. Your loved to play out a perfect suspense and you kept us all entertained throughout. Not once did I even think about leaving the "continue on" button alone.

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You spun this story beautifully, and I am completely behind in your calling it a book. Change everyone's names and give readers a bit more backround and I think you have a chance at selling this book to the public.

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Your talent and skill for writing amazes me, and to tell the truth, I'm not quite sure why more people haven't reveiwed. I can tell you right now that I will be sure to spread the word of your genius around.

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Keep writing (please!)

~Ciu

Ah...this story is excellent. I have actually been following it for quite some time, but on another account. I have not found any mistakes in your text in terms of grammar or spelling. Your attention to detail is nice to see. Many people are too lazy to do such. The plot throughout the story unfolds at a nice rate, leaving the reader with suspense, yet not to bore him or her. Hm...the end I suppose? Well all good things must come to an end. You have done a splendid job on this story, and I hope that you continue writing other fanfics.

VC

And the plot thickens! Good chapter, well worth the long wait!