Reviews for Things Change? Not Likely
RukiaWhiteMoon chapter 1 . 12/30/2019
This is so accurate, I totally see them being in a relationship without realizing they are actually in a relationship lol You wrote it so perfectly and the smex part was well...smexy :)))
jlluh chapter 1 . 9/3/2018
"I'll get the closet ready."
:)
curio cherry chapter 1 . 7/29/2018
They're clueless but adorable!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2017
Muy bonito :3
applepieshiomai chapter 1 . 10/24/2016
His is perfect :D
d.t. mars chapter 1 . 12/30/2015
I can't even lieā€”this is EXACTLY how these two idiots would get together. You are a genius, and thank you for sharing this with us!
Ignis Draconem chapter 1 . 10/26/2015
i was actually looking for this, read it about a year back ans suddenly wated to read i again, spent about two hours searching (i can totally see them doing this btw)
yeahbuddy2256 chapter 1 . 7/17/2015
Scoop very cute. I enjoyed this story very much. Thank you.
Mirabelle Lu Who chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
I absolutely love this!
schoolgurl95 chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
Great lemon and I could actually see Ichigo and Rukia acting like this. XD Good job!
ThoughtfullStudent chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
This is the single most beautiful story I've read during my short time on this sight, perfectly reflects both of their characters. I could hardly contain my laughter at some points!
Meghan-Black01 chapter 1 . 1/16/2014
Aaaawwww! They're so oblivious it's adorable. At least they figured it out in the end!
JustGrace13 chapter 1 . 1/5/2014
Hahahahaha Oh my goodness :) I was so ready for this to be one of those "it's totally casual, oh but now I'm falling in love with you" fics, but you majorly surprised me. This was hilarious. It borderlined plain silly, but it was so cute, and the lines were so good.
I'm definitely not an expert on writing sex scenes, but the only two things that stood out to me were the vocab and the fixation on the tongues at first. The vocab is more of an individual thing, so don't really worry about it. But, the images of two people's tongue "battling" and then "massaging someone's mouth" and so on, it can make the scene less romantic, and more funny/awkward. You are probably describing their actions perfectly accurately, but that's not what people who are kissing are thinking about.
Try focusing on the sensations and reactions more. And be more specific/detail-orientated. Instead of, (I'm exaggerating) "her tongue explored his mouth, massaged his tongue, and did a little dance between his lips," something like, "Her tongue slid between his lips, giving him a taste of her sweetness" or "he bit down on her bottom lip, taking control and making her moan with pleasure."
Just some thoughts :) Excellent job overall though!
pinkomamori chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
ummm.. is it just me, or ichigo and rukia are plainly stupid?

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that's all i gotta say.
Mahi-Mahi chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
*probably how it will really happen*
Lol, really, they're both dense enough. I cracked up with the, 'Why didn't anyone tell us?' and 'How did we not notice this?!' Omg, hilarious.
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