Reviews for You're Not Your Father |
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Guest chapter 7 . 6/24/2016 I have two comments for you. First, please continue this story if it all possible. I realize you have a life but this story is amazing. Second comment, I love how you take the real show's dialogue, and use it in the perfect moments. |
Guest chapter 7 . 12/9/2014 I loved it |
Ghostwriter chapter 7 . 1/17/2014 I love it. Great twist with them actually being married from the beginning. Catch ya on the flip side. |
Guest chapter 7 . 1/5/2014 Please update this story soon I really like it. |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/2/2014 This story is so great I love point of view, nice writing! |
DaughterofthemostHigh chapter 7 . 12/26/2013 :) yay! A new chapter! I hope you can keep updating on a fairly regular basis! |
KevinxoShelley chapter 7 . 12/26/2013 Great job. |
Ealasaid Una chapter 7 . 12/26/2013 She has sam and the team behind her |
Ealasaid Una chapter 6 . 12/18/2013 interesting point of view |
Guest chapter 5 . 12/16/2013 If i look at the name of the story i think his father has abused him or something. Update soon please |
DaughterofthemostHigh chapter 6 . 12/17/2013 Whiny? umm... I think it's Winny! good chapter! looking forward to the next one :) |
KevinxoShelley chapter 6 . 12/17/2013 Great work. |
Buckeye am I chapter 6 . 12/17/2013 Oh, it really hit her. She is pregnant. No Sam, you are not your dad. |
Guest chapter 4 . 12/15/2013 Haha, so predictable. I'm surprised that they didn't connect the dots and realize she was pregnant sooner. You said "THEIR MY KIDS TOO", but it should be "they're". I know it was probably just a typo or some sort of careless error, but for future reference I'd like to point out the following: there: a place "oh look at that snowman over there!" their: shows possession "that's their house" they're: a combo of they & are "they're so annoying" Also, when the nurse introduced herself you have one sentence that goes "She knew he didn't know her even though she him." It looks like you forgot a word here or something... I don't know what happened, but you might want to fix it :) Overall, nice job and I can't wait for the next chapter! |
KevinxoShelley chapter 5 . 12/16/2013 I can't wait for the next chapter, great job. |