this is awesome need new chapter within time

Can't wait for the rest of the story

Magic . Your history's is very nice and interesting

omg it's like elsa

Mire plz

There we go, now I'm all caught up.
If you ever need a beta reader or somebody to talk ideas over with, I would love to help. I still enjoy the story and your writing has improved a lot since the first chapter.

I do feel like this Ciel wouldn't forget about his brother completely through the entire fiasco and trip home. Maybe he would have noticed earlier and been panicking on the way home?

Ah, here is a suggestion: if you have something you want to comment on in the story, leave an asterisk, then at the bottom of the story, put an asterisk there and then the Author's Note.
An A/N in the middle of the chapter can remove the immersion of the story too easily.

P.S. I don't think I got the reference.

A few things moved a bit fast for my liking, but I'm still enjoying the story.

I won't say this is professional grade stuff, but I do enjoy the story and so far like where you are going and what you are trying!

Good. Maybe cool or perhaps great.

Love it. Update soon.

Ciel is an insecure turtle so it's good to Hadrian pulling him from his shell a bit. :-)

Love the chapter!~

Hahaha, they're really brothers ;)