To GenieNight08
Then go kill yourself. You should respect the author of the story. That's too much. This is theit imagination and opinion, not yours. So go and die first. And to the author, don't mind this person. This is just a person who likes to insult someone this person thinks that yout story 'sucks'. Keep writing with your imagination, author.

Go kill yourself asshole

This is worst written piece of garbage I have ever seen.

This entire garbage excuse for a fanfic amounts to bash fairy tail.

You are a joke of a writer.

This fanfic is an insult to Mishima.

So go commit suicide you piece of shit.

And all the assholes who supported this garbage. You really are pathetic pieces of garbage.

This is much worse than every bad Naruto fanfic combined.

Please update soon

It bother me a bit that Lucy didn't make the same connection as Natsu in the Tartaros Arc when she managed to figure out Markarov's vague clue in the Tenrou Island Arc.

YYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! IT MIGHT BE SHORT BUT IT'S WORTH WAITING A YEAR AND A HALF! THANK YOU!

More!

Hope u update soon
I miss erza
You are one amazing author

Oooo this is getting crazy

I love this story. I really like how Lisanna is doing more things than she does in canon.

This story is fantastic. I read it all in one go... when I first saw it, I was like.. "How can she/he make the Tartaros arc darker?" I'm glad I was interested enough to find out. This is a really amazing story and I love how the differences shift the story line. I also love the extra focus on Lucy, because I really think she has lots of potential. More than just potential - I just think pre-Tartaros she was overshadowed by her friends a lot because they had all been fighting in Fairy Tail since they were children and she hadn't really used offensive magic a lot pre-Fairy Tail. But that's aside the point. I really love this story and hope you keep up with it... the Aquarius & Lucy moments in the manga ... really made me cry. Have to admit I even shed a tear over this.. and I really can't wait to read the next chapter in Aquarius' point of view and then further what happens with Lucy and the guild and how long you keep the story going. Thanks for writing this, I hope you get more reviews.. you deserve them. I think part of the problem is if some people don't read the manga/don't watch sub they haven't seen the Tartaros arc yet, so are probably avoiding this. Not sure how many people that includes, but it's probably a factor. But yeah! Great job. _

Hi, I am really enjoying your story and don't really want to nitpick because I'm enjoying it regardless but then I realized you'd probably want to know... unless it's a difference in language, it's not "you're save now" or "To Lucy's relieve". It's "safe" and "relief". :) But aside from those small things, really good job! This is so interesting.

Gray will soon meet his Silver. Intense.

Having just finished this story i must agree it deserves more reviews and i really hope you will be able to update soon, as I really enjoyed this chapter and it finally got to one of my favorite moments

Oh Erza, i missed you...

I kinda prefer your Lamy to canon lamy...