So cute :D

Hahaha awesome ending

Got me hysterical the moment Ed realized how awesome boobies are. HAHA. But god, they are SO awkward! But that's just how they are, and they're freaking adorable.

I can imagine the both of them being all cutesy like in your story. Power to Edwin!

Holy crap this was amazing!

Loved it, excellent! :3

This is really cute!

That was adorbz. Perfect level of awkwardness. Bravo.

I was good

This is so true to canon. Love it! It really is exactly how those two would behave around each other. Great little fic.

This was so good o hmy god. I love this one shot so much, and it was written so wonderfully, and just-wow... I love how awkward you made them, even while kissing! Great job author, and if you decide to make this one shot into a series I certainly would not be complaining!

Why was this rated M?

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! Although, I think this should be rated M. There's some pretty mature stuff in your fic. Anyway, amazing job!

Awhhh! This is so realistic, your characters are spot on. It's exactly like Edward to feel uncomfortable whereas Winry is more forward. I like it and the ending made me smile lol

I would've loved to see Al and Pinako's reaction haha!

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this was really really good! Haven't read a great fanfiction like this in a while! Thanks :) omg so cute! I'm a little sad we didn't get to see Pinako's reaction to her grand daughter coming home in a see through dress with Edward through aha

Yes! Very sweet and just how I'd imagine them to act and react to each other.