YUM! :D I actually enjoy this pairing too (I enjoy pretty much any pairing, if Akashi's in it~) and an M-rated sequel would be greaaaaaat .

I love cheesy ending!

I'm in love as well ! xD
With AkaFuri...

Wish it was Canon...

Poor Kouki... bitten out of nowhere by stranger...

Ewww… I read your summary, but… still… ewww…
No doubt about it, Furihata, was on the receiving end of one of the worst bets ever devised. The wager, the bite mark, and the blood - that trio is all kinds of messed up. And, yet, that episode remains - not at the very top of his odd list, but *near* it instead …? Wha…? Furihata needs to reassess his priorities or something! Though he was not meaning to, the Point Guard certainly gave off the wrong vibe. And, Kuroko! I love how he popped up and responded to that vibe with anger. Akashi and he may not have been on the greatest terms (pre Winter Cup), but he obviously cares for his Ex-Captain’s welfare now. I don’t know if the cryptic messages, following after, were really necessary, though… I guess he just had to add them in before departing, haha! ;) - I only saw a few spelling mistakes!

*Favorite Lines*

Tossing both paper balls into the trash can, pretending that it was a hoop and I made two against Akashi… (Agree 100% w/Michelle7ate9. The humor works.)

Ignoring a scornful look from an elderly woman. She must be one of those extremely conservative elders that hates the new generation with a burning passion. (XD - The archetype fits, if a scornful look was going to be coming from anyone, it would most certainly be her.)

I found it almost relaxing when those basketball calloused fingers carded themselves through my hair. All of that power, treating me like something precious, it was nice. (Ah, I love these two lines and the emotions they represent. The hasty speech, Furihata made later, saddened me. :’-(
Long-held anxieties an insecurities were laid bare. It aligned w/his character, but it was still so… (;A ;).

It dawned on me that all of that took place in a public area, I paled. (XD - Better late, than never, eh?)

Hahahaha, "It will." That was the best line ever.

Oh my, it's choooo chweeeeetttttttt. I mean... It's so sweet! But honestly, I'd love it so much if Akashi snaps at Furihata and gives a light punishment, like biting Furihata's neck as well to remind him that Furihata was his. MWAHAHAHAHAHA! Sorry, I'm just a sadistic psycho. Don't mind me. Your story is awesome the way it is.

You get all the stars I can offer! Its good

Love this couple! There just isn't enough fics of this pair out there! Great work :)

So cute! You said in the description that it was failed humor, but I think you did alright on the humor part; yes sir.
And what's this I hear about a M rated sequel? yeahh buddeh

I always feel good when more AkaxFuri stories are added to Fanfiction! Anyway, I really loved this story and I hope that you do write a sequel!

3 Spirit

Ooh yes, please to the smut scene! Hahahahaha
And to think just a year and a half ago I would have gone pale at the simple mention of the word smut! lol
I blame AO3! A lot of the amazing stories there are rated as Explicit- I've been corrupted! (…and loving it!)

You're writing was a joy to read. I'm craving some AkaFuri love after reading and screaming like a crazy fangirl at the latest update of KnB! Keep up the good work!

who said the ending was suck? i always love the claimed kouki, hehehe
thx for the new alafuri
and pls make the more...

thank you for making akafuri fanfic!

Oh my god, this is amazing! Seriously, this had just that right amount of cute fluff and seriousness that it just achieved that feeling of being believable yet oh so sweet! Thank you so much for writing this, I loved reading it and I can wait if there will be a sequel!

BMS

PLEASE DO PLEASE PLEASE WRITE IT ;w;