That’s such a sweet story!

Oh god I love this so much... this is such a great story... the whole plot was well put together... I sort of wanted more... hope you did more M rated chapters in this... ? I really love how you portrait Emma and Killian... want more thanks

This song is my favourite song ever and I love love love how you’ve made it into a fanfic!

I’ve been rewatching OUAT and I needed some extra captain swan in my life... this AU was amazing and I loved every minute of reading it! Thanks author 3

Very nice chapter, I love how you wrote the Snow scene

I love the book but it needs more ... well... zing ... MORE chapters ... and get Emma to tell her mum and dad the truth

What a wonderful, delightful tale this was. I was enchanted and spellbound the whole way though, this was lovely bit of fairy tale weaving here. I'm fond of the True Love idea so critical to Once Upon A Time and this more than delivers on that motif.

I really hope you keep writing this its so good I started reading it today and I couldn't stop reading it it's so good and i would totally love to read more

I read this in a few days after seeing it mentioned on Tumblr recently. I loved it. You mentioned in one of your comments something about needing to describe things more. I'm kind of glad you didn't. The story wasn't lacking at all in my opinion and moved at a nice pace. I'm not a fan of Neal, but I liked how you portrayed him here - he doesn't always have to be a jerk. And the honor in Killian of holding himself back with Emma felt more true to the times than a lot of the M rated fics I read. It just really fit the style of the story and more wasn't needed. I'm grateful you added the last chapter. I needed that proposal after all that buildup. Thanks for sharing. Now I must check out your other stories.

This story was beautifully done and a joy to read. Thank you for sharing it with us even when it didn't always go the way you originally planned.

'"I'm a prince, now," Killian quipped, "hadn't you heard?"

"Prince of what?" Regina taunted, arching an eyebrow. "Wishful thinking?"

Killian was not in the mood. He took a step forward, but Tinkerbell caught his arm.'

Oh, the burn! It stings so good. Regina's snark is always a pleasant surprise :)

'Snow White woke up with the strangest feeling of déjà vu. Her throat was raw, as though she'd been screaming the day before. How odd.'

What a perfect way to end this chapter. I'll keep on reading but I wanted to get this off my chest :)

Since you posted this fic some years ago I'm just reviewing at the end; I'm sure you've moved on to other things but I thought I'd leave a little note anyway... I loved it. Your Killian sets an impossibly high standard for men everywhere, I have to say. I liked this Emma who was strong and self-reliant but still influenced by those around her. I loved how you wrote their interactions. My only complaint whatsoever would be that it ended so suddenly... Needs a few epilogues ;-) but really, thank you. I very much enjoyed it.

So, I've started reading lots of your stories, and I must say I love them
I know this story is long finished, but I just thought to let you know Regina and Robin are absolutely cute. And Emma and Killian too.
I'll continue reading the story now. :)

Awesome fic & job! I Loved it! :)