Reviews for The Turnabout Family
Luwen chapter 1 . 4/10/2014
It's so fluffy and cute and perfect.
Every fandom deserves such a sweet fic.
Fervour chapter 1 . 2/15/2014
That was so adorable I what I

Thankyou for writing this, I absolutely love Daddy Wright fics.
ComatoseButterfly chapter 1 . 1/1/2014
This is the cutest thing I've ever read. I'm actually crying at the last lines.

Great job, and kudos to you for the Travier inclusion because that's one of my most underappreciated otps. uwu;;

Keep it up!
Yumeko chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
That was a lovely read, thanks for writing it.
pika318 chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
Great fic _ It made me feel all warm inside. When I played Dual Destinies, I've always thought that Phoenix made a great "father" to Trucy, Apollo and Athena.
FireEdge chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
What an incredibly heart-warming story. I always did think that the Wright Anything Agency seemed like a big family, and you're definitely right on the dot with Phoenix being everyone's father. I actually think that Phoenix will end up being a bachelor for life, haha.

Anyway, I really enjoyed the little scenes that Phoenix witnesses between all of his "children". They were just the right amount of cheesy fluff but still had a strong meaning behind them. It's pretty funny how unabashed Phoenix is at witnessing these rather private scenes. He's pretty good at being non-plussed though.

Also, I just wanted to say I absolutely loved Phoenix's train of thought in the first segment about Trucy asking him for a new mommy. So funny, and such a classic Phoenix thought to have, haha. Also enjoyed how that grape juice spitting was reenacted at the beginning and the nend. Oh, and Athena punching a guy out is simply the best.

The only thing I can point out is that you do have spelling errors here and there. Mostly it's a verb tense issue (like "has" instead of "had") and missing words, etc. But really, they don't detract too much from the story. Anyway, thanks for a great read that really leaves a smile on your face!
AceFangirl chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
I don't even know what to say, this is just perfect. Phoenix does have a family, a great family actually, and he got by living a life he loves, not a love life. It's nice see the youth of the Anything Agency grow up through Phoenix's eyes, then to have it suddenly dawn on him how much he cares about them. Excellent work, kudos to you!
pyr0technic chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
AWWWWWW OH MY GOD I WAS CRYING AT THE END I LOVED THIS SO MUCH
Lieju chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
Yeah, they are totally a family.
We don't know much of Phoenix's parents and home, but pretty much everyone else has no 'traditional' family.
Luckily Wright anything agency is closer than most law agencies.
DragonNiro chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
A very good story here. I like this.
TheMysteriousGeek2345 chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
So cute! :D and yay! Athena/Simon shipping! :D though meeting the sister would be tres awkward... Never seen Trucy/Klavier before, but it works in my head... That's it, I'm shipping them, along with Apollo/Juniper! :)