| Reviews for The Big Four and the Mystery of Mother Gothel |
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   ThermiteHawk chapter 11 . 8/16/2019 How long did it take you to come up with the librarian’s name. (Deadpanned) |
| Elite Warrior chapter 5 . 4/26/2019 Jack Frost...and Camikazi! Together. In the same house. Oh Thor the school is doomed! Atleast Tuff and Ruff aren't joining in, otherwise there won't be a Hogwarts left standing by the end of the year! Oh Thor the horror those four could bring! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/16/2018 Sounds like foreshadowing. Is MG going to teach at Hogwarts? |
| KorrieChan chapter 10 . 9/30/2018 Hiccup’s scar was caused by a dragon when Valka(his mom) was carried away. This happend in the 2nd movie. So there will be no references to the 2nd movie because the story won’t line up with the httyd2 movie |
| Until You Hate Me chapter 8 . 5/28/2018 "Zits" "NO!" lol |
| Lexi chapter 17 . 11/30/2017 'dont want anyone to end up like Princess Elsa' XD thata brilliant! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/16/2017 Your story is amazing and honestly really well thought out. I would love for more highlight on Jack (only because he is my personal favorite). One thing I think you could change or improve would be your humor- now I know it’s sometimes hard to write humor, but it would lighten up your story and give it a nicer flow (try using sarcasm, deadpanning, and puns). I have always imagined Hiccup as someone who uses all three of those. Jack would be more of a sarcasm and a stating the obvious type of person. Merida is a user of sarcasm in my opinion. And Repunzle or Punzie is good at just being overly positive- causing some pretty funny problems and cute puns. Again, your story is awesome and I can’t wait to get the chance to read more of year 2 and finish the series. Also- your timeline is a bit confusing, your are going to want to make that clearer for readers. |
| Curlytothebrain chapter 6 . 4/11/2017 I really love your stories, this is the second in i have read and they are both very good. The plot is so intriguing. I havent been able to stop reading. I know that this is the second year but what are the order of all your ffics? Also are thier going to be anypairings later on and who do you ship? |
| LittleWriter9038 chapter 20 . 12/8/2016 I used to not ship jarida... but now i kinda do... BUT i STILL think that Mericcup is better.. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/2/2016 YAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS |
| DHW chapter 11 . 5/6/2016 Please don't let Hiccup be dead:(): |
| DHW chapter 10 . 5/6/2016 OH MY GODS OH MY GODS. this. is. so. EPIE! :) |
| DHW chapter 7 . 5/6/2016 I bet Jack is under mind cantall |
| DHW chapter 5 . 5/5/2016 Camicazi yes, thank you love the ida |
| toothlessfangirllover chapter 1 . 4/14/2016 You have no idea how much I love these stories! You are an excellent writer! Keep up the good work! 3 |
