I love this story, with the plot and all, and because its kagamiXuroko pairing. Although you need to check your spellings, like it should be care less not careless. Almost the same spelling but different meaning. It should be thanks not tanks. Those are just some few words i remembered, but there's a lot more. You also need to smoothen your sentence, especially the dialogues. Good luck with your writing!

Awww :D

sonia After being in relationship with emma for seven years,he broke up with me, I did everything possible to bring him back but all was in vain, I wanted him back so much because of the love I have for him, I begged him with everything, I made promises but he refused. I explained my problem to someone online and she suggested that I should rather contact a spell caster that could help me cast a spell to bring him back but I am the type that never believed in spell, I had no choice than to try it, I mailed the spell caster, and he told me there was no problem that everything will be okay before three days, that my ex will return to me before three days, he cast the spell and surprisingly in the second day, it was around 4pm. My ex called me, I was so surprised, I answered the call and all he said was that he was so sorry for everything that happened, that he wanted me to return to him, that he loves me so much. I was so happy and went to him, that was how we started living together happily again. Since then, I have made promise that anybody I know that have a relationship problem, I would be of help to such person by reffering him or her to the only real and powerful spell caster who helped me with my own problem and who is different from all the fake ones out there. Anybody could need the help of the spell caster, his email:
you can email him if you need his assistance in your relationship or anything. CAN NEVER STOP TALKING ABOUT YOU SIR HIS EMAIL ADDRESS IS:dr
CONTACT HIM NOW FOR SOLUTION TO ALL YOUR PROBLEM

My names are lilian jane am from USA i want to use this
opportunity to thank my great doctor who really made my life a
pleasurable one today. This great Doctor brought my husband back to
me, i had 3 lovely kids for my husband, about 3 years ago i and my
husband has been into one quarrel or the other until he finally left
me for one lady. i felt my life was over and my kids thought then
will never see their father again. i tried to be strong just for the
kids but i couldn't control the pains that torments my heart, my
heart was filled with sorrows and pains because i was really in love
with my husband. Every day and night i think of him and i always wish he
will come back to me, until one day i met a good friend of mine that
was also in a situation like me but her problem was her ex-boyfriend
who she had an unwanted pregnancy for and he refused to take
responsibility and dumped her. she told me that mine was a small case
and that i shouldn't worry about it at all so i asked her what was the
solution to my problems and she gave me this great man phone number
and his email address. i was doubting if this man was the solution, so i
contacted this great man and he told me what to do and i deed them
all, he told me to wait for just seven days and that my husband will come
crawling on his kneels just for forgiveness so i faithfully deed what
this great man asked me to do and for sure after four days i heard a
knock on the door, in a great surprise i saw him on his kneels and i
was speechless, when he saw me, all he did was crying and asking me
for forgiveness, from that day, all the pains and sorrows in my heart
flew away,since then i and my husband and our lovely kids are
is why i want to say a big thanks to Doctoroviasuyi. This
great man made me to understand that there is know problem on earth that
has no solution so please if you know that you have this same problem
or any problem that is similar, i will advise you to come straight to
this great man. you can email him at

I loved every second of this. :)
Thank you so much for writing it. I'm feeling particularly down today and I just needed something cute to lift my spirits. Thank you.

So full of sugar and fluff that it can make your teeth rot but...I actually loved it! It was so sweet and so in character that one cannot possibly hate it. Thank you so much for sharing it! you made me smile! (like a loon too!)

As ever, dearest writer-san, this was glorious! Kuroko can be so oblivious too, no? It's usually Kagami so it was a treat seeing them this way. Thank you so much!
-Nekozawa Katsuki

Aww i didn't expect Kagami to be that 'discreetly' sweet... Gyaah! I love this soo much... So so cute...

Kawaii! It's...so...GOOD! Well i guess now we'll all know Kuroko's um ... ADORABLE side whenever he's in...need?or trouble?...Anyway...All I want to say is...*takes in deep breath*

I Love IT! Woo! :)

Oh my :) this was so tenderly sweet and loving. great job! I think I'll look more at your fics.

gyaaaaa
what can I say to you-
it just too SWEET.
especially in the last part!
oh, I reallywant to pinch that both silly w
anyway good job luna-san,
please write more fic

Aww... muy lindo!

This was such a cute and hilarious story; I'm glad that I got to read more of your KnB stories. Don't tell any other KnB writers, but you write the best KnB fanfics. I'm actually in the process of writing my very first KnB fic and once I get it posted, I would love for your to read it; I'll let you know when I'm done!

3 Spirit

Just 3 words:
It Was Awesome !

OwO this story is just so sweet ! Hope that you can write more kagakuro, they are so cute (* v *)/