Reviews for Void |
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princessanime29 chapter 1 . 11/6/2013 It was good! The girl was weird and I sort of wished I knew who she was. I didnt know Yasu was a real game character! One question though...did the girls soul get stolen and thats why shes eerie or does she still have her soul? |
ChocolateTeapot chapter 1 . 11/5/2013 This is a cool idea and you handle it very well. You do a great job at making her seem unsettling and eerie without going overboard. I particularly liked the description Yasu's relief when she walked on. However, there are many spelling errors, which seriously detracts from the story. The end is really good too. |