Reviews for Roads and Retribution
Munkeyfump20 chapter 2 . 12/6/2016
Cliff hanger again but thanks for the read
clairesredpen chapter 2 . 12/4/2013
We've only just had ep.6 in the UK so i'm having to tread very carefully on this site to avoid any spoilers... so i'm allowed to read your story now! Loved it, totally spot on! off to read more of your stories now! x
Jane Marple chapter 2 . 11/13/2013
Very good and perceptive! Very well written!
JisbonMustHappen chapter 2 . 11/11/2013
God, the spoilers. I stopped at the begining of the TV guide article because I feared a nervous breakdown. I'll read it right before (Red John) but idk how long we'd wait for (my blue heaven)? So my plan might not work and I'll end up with a nervous breakdown afterall

In other news, can't wait for your next collab with Donna.
glindalovesshoes chapter 2 . 11/10/2013
I really really loved the second chap. You did such a good job on it and I want to thank you, because I was so angry with Jane. No I was really mad with him, because he was the selfish bastard and left lisbon standing there, but somehow your tag helped me to understand his motives better.
i'm honest, you made me cry and this doesn't happen that often... I'm hoping for many more tags and can't wait for your new story with Donna!
marshmallowdeviant chapter 2 . 11/10/2013
Ugh. Oh me heart strings. Some great Jane angst here. This is exactly, exactly what I feel like he would have been thinking. Lovely and devastating all at the same time. You knocked it out of the park, lady. (sniffle) ;) thanks x
MentalistLover13 chapter 2 . 11/9/2013
This was beautiful! Great job! I think this was exactly what Jane was feeling!
Idonthaveaname chapter 2 . 11/9/2013
Since, most of America had not seen last week's episode due to CBS and the NFL, this was a nice glimpse into the episode "Fire and Brimstone." Thank you. it was good.
Mossi.b chapter 2 . 11/9/2013
You have managed, once again to put words to the way I read Jane's actions, it was obviously a difficult decision he made to leave Lisbon, and I do think he meant every word he said to her there in the sunset, but he needed to pay his earlier debt to his family, and it HAD to take presidence over what he feels to someone else. Excellent, as always.
Guest chapter 2 . 11/9/2013
Very interesting POV from both sides! Can't wait to read your new collaboration with .Donna in December! I hope December will come fast enough so we know where this loved show of our goes!
citroensandblueteacups chapter 2 . 11/8/2013
Beautifully written.
Lalalupin chapter 2 . 11/8/2013
This was a great wee two shot :) I really liked how you explored both Jane and Lisbon's sides of the story.
Donnamour1969 chapter 2 . 11/8/2013
Yes! Just what I was hoping you'd do. Great justification for his leaving-she would be a distraction, maybe used as leverage. We all know he loves her. Thanks for reminding us so beautifully. And I look forward to working with you again soon, my friend.
Guest chapter 2 . 11/8/2013
Yep. They're justified. I almost cried when I read the part about his daughter's curls and their wedding day and all. I really liked this. And I love that you and donnamour are doing another story! Yay!
Guest chapter 2 . 11/8/2013
Bless you for this. My shipper sensibilities took a near-death blow on Sunday and this tag is like a stiff drink and a warm blanket. I still feel pretty stabbity towards Jane, but this makes me think I could use a butter knife instead of a machete.

"What he felt for Lisbon did not negate the fact that he needed to make this right."

This is where I part company from Jane. Nothing can ever make it right because Angela and Charlotte will always be dead. All he is doing is causing Lisbon pain.
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