I don't kow if you still on, but I would love to see where the rest of this story goes! Does Jane keep Betsy? Does Red John find out he is creating a new family? Would love to see you finish this!

I have just finished reading this story and have fallen in love with it! I hope that you continue to write and finish this story as I would love to see where you take it and how it ends.

I love this story! And you made their moment perfect!

PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY, I MISS YOUR STORY!

Please continue this story! It's so beautifully written :)

Still hoping you will finish this story as it is beautifully written and very addictive. A big thankyou for sharing it with us all.

Hope you continue this story.

Cant wait for the next chapter!

I was cleaning out my in tray and came across this one I think I have had other ones since but I don't remember the ending to this one. But thank you for a very good read I will go to your page and see if I have read the rest if there are any more that is

He like a dad to her

Really enjoying this chapter from Lisbon pov. Love your writing in it. So concise, tight and yet moving. And this (long awaited) development is adding a new dimension to this already very endearing story. Love it!

He like a brother to her

Love love LOVE how this is going! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Lovely chapter. That kiss was a game changer, and she's both terrified and excited.

Oh...this just gets better and better. Thank you for another great chapter. I am loving hearing their thoughts and fears. You have an amazing talent. Please keep writing!