That was great descriptions you used. I felt Cora's plight to want to be with her daughter and the knowledge of knowing it was wrong. Great job!

Hi! I'm really enjoying the story! Please continue?

I need more.

Like it so far. Paragraph it a bit better

WOW! That was just...wow! I really hope you continue this! This was pretty amazing! Was Regina awake at any time of it? If she was, did she know what Cora was doing...and who she was thinking of while at it. I really like this, and hope to see more from you.