Reviews for New Eden: Invasion |
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Elrond Koening chapter 1 . 7/16/2014 A great work! that being said, I believe you should re-read through some of you excerpts. There are minimal grammatical errors arising in some of your paragraphs. Other than that however, what a great story begging. can't wait to begin reading the next chapter! |
bwbennett777 chapter 2 . 7/8/2014 Great start! Love the fight scene! Looking forward to more! |