Reviews for A World Cast in Shadow
excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 4/23/2016
Oh, my, yes. And no matter what he tries to do to save them, all Slytherin is condemned for the sin of Tom Riddle in it-and Dumbledore has written them off already.

What he should do is to send Snape to Beauxbatons, but of course it won't happen.
Kairan1979 chapter 1 . 11/7/2015
Interesting story. We don't have enough good fice with Slughorn's POV.
J.F.C chapter 1 . 2/2/2015
Quite an interesting AU you have made in here with Horace POV of things, I would have never thought of him in such a position... though, he is definitely in character by been a coward and not trying to take actions of things, even with such a strong guilt, in order to save those kids. That's Horace for sure. Love the one-shot... I'm definitely understand a bit more the world you have created through this one-shots. Very well done so far.
AvidReader2236 chapter 1 . 12/9/2014
You had me at the summary. Very well written.
Alethea27 chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
The children of Slytherin will definitely be lost if you don't even try to save them, Horace.
The Dark One Rising chapter 1 . 8/17/2014
This definitely adds to my understanding of your portrayal of him in recent chapters of "We can Begin the World all Over Again".
Veridissima chapter 1 . 7/21/2014
Really liked it
And you're right it does explain why Slughorn was choosen to travel to the past with them. I hope he does a better job guiding them
Amazing
BeautifulDesertFoxglove chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
Ergh, I've always hated Slughorn. Je"s bloody annoying.
Professor Radar chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
Hopefully Slughorn will remember this past guilt and take a more active role the second time around to change the lives of some Slytherins and keep them from joining the Death Eaters. I can't wait to see if Slughorn & Flitwick ever find out that some of the students have their past memories as well. I'm assuming they eventually do.

I absolutely can not wait to see how Slughorn & Flitwick react when Severus first shows up at Hogwarts. Even though they eventually do find out the truth about Severus and his true motives it will be hard to not push aside the memories of him killing Dumbledore and his year as Headmaster. They know that he is (was?) a main catalyst in the war and in defeating Voldemort. We don't know yet if you plan on them knowing that Severus has his memories too, but if they don't know it will definitely be an uncomfortable reunion.
2BeRini chapter 1 . 11/1/2013
per usual, you write the perfect one shot to fit in the "We Can Begin the World all Over Again" universe. although you don't say it outright, i can feel the guilt that horace feels for not taking an more active role of guiding his House, for not saving those who can be saved. he's fearful of the past (grindelwald) and he's fearful of the future darkness he helped create indirectly (him telling tom riddle of hocurexes).

i love how you describe narcissa - of all the Black sisters' i have always found her the most intriguing and the most dangerous. no one expects anything of the youngest, delicate Black sister, but narcissa proves that she can rule in the shadows not w/brute force, like bellatrix, but with softly spoken words. can you imagine if narcissa was voldemort's most loyal DE? he might have won the war because of killing everyone in sight, narcissa had the gift of, as you so poetically put it, had the gift of changing the hearts of men. scary!

so now we know why horace has come back w/his memories of BEFORE - somehow, the Fates think it is possible for him to save more than one person of Slytherin and salvage the reputation of our House. this one shot makes me want to see him and flitwick in action.

great story, "Outstanding" on the grading scale!
Madlenita chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
Thanks for new story, i guess Horace POV was interesting, his opinion on Severus, Lucius and Narcissa the most ;-).
Very Small Prophet chapter 1 . 10/27/2013
Severus is cruel? You haven't seen this year's Gryffs in full flower yet, have you Sluggy? Maybe if you tried protecting your Slyths from those cheerful bullies they'd have somewhere to go besides the Dark Lord. Especially Severus.