Well this story was an epic one. I hope write a sequel to this amazing but sad story.

As soon as Roman got bitten but not killed I was wondering if he was going to become a werewolf now too, and that's obviously what is happening. I guess that makes Roman the first victim. He might be alive, but he's not Roman anymore.

With that in mind, I don't think Mack will get killed. Even wolf-Roman seems to want her, so he's not going to bite her. Dean, on the other hand, I think is living on borrowed time. Next time he goes near Mack, even though he's only a friend, I think he might be for it.

Another very well written chapter.

Boy, am I glad I decided to check out your writing. You most certainly did not dissapoint. Your descriptive writing and your dialog are both excellent, in my opinion. You have done s terrific job of setting the scene and introducing us to the characters with these first two chapters, including our new friend the werewolf right at the end there. Wonderful way to finish a chapter.

So, five people went, how many will come back? I think Seth and his girl will be the first ones to say farewell.

As much as I like the story and the writing, in a way it saddens me to read this. My reason? You're not writing for the wrestling fandom anymore. We're chronically short of talented authors over here at the moment. I'd love to see you try and pick up the ball again.

well-written as always. I swear-why aren't you published? (unless you are and I just don't know it) see, THIS-THIS is why you're one of my favorite writers, hon. The detail and the obvious effort you put into each story and buildup that you accomplish is to be envied. In my opinion, you're a raw talent with this. Be well and I wish you a happy holiday season.

-Al (100 Proof)

*sniff* Dean died... That's harsh. Wonder what they are going to do now? On another note... I hope things go better for you. Even before the year is out. Stay strong. Remember there are people that care about you. Take care.

You might call it finicky but it actually made me cry, losing Dean like that and their parting words.

We are on to several years like yours. I can't say that misery loves company...try to keep your head above water. (Whatever you do, don't try to stick a stiletto in Karma's ss. I tried a leopard print; she broke my wrist and gave me Lyme's. She does NOT have a sense of humor!)

This was a lovely update! When you have a chance, bury your head in fiction. It's a great stress relief. :)

You know, I really don't go for the supernatural stuff, but this story is so intriguing and you are so talented. I really can't wait to see an update. Hope it's soon. :)

I'm so glad you're back! Just recommended this story to my Tumblr children too.

I was tortured during a massage today, so can't really focus but this was a wonderful surprise in my inbox. You know how much I love BNR. That's my constructive criticism - needs more Butt Nakey Romey.

Mack never ceases to amaze me with how forgiving and strong she can be. I would love if she could rediscover her love for the man mixed in with the beast, because he really is a great guy. The remorse and conflicting emotions he feels are spot on.

The addition of Dean and his finally accepting his feelings for Mack is very welcome. The idea of guns makes me shudder too, I really hope he doesn't have to use it either!

More. Always more. Thank you :)

What will happen when they get to there destination?

Glad to see you back!
Looking forward to finding out what happens to Roman and the guys.

This has just been a treat to read! Being from the south, it's always nice to see a fic set in a state that I've actually been to, so it's really easy to picture everything - plus, I just love Louisiana's whole atmosphere, if that makes sense. I'm loving the plot. It's very unique and I am really excited to see where you decide to take this! Keep up the great work!

The level of destruction surprised me and made me sad. Loki is gone? What a valiant last move :( I hope Dean is okay, but waking up in the rubble, in pain and maybe vaguely remembering that your best friend is off with that beast somewhere? You probably couldn't be classified as okay.

Mack is so strong! I'm glad that she got to let it out, because she was carrying waaaay too much. I wonder how far ahead she has thought - does she have a plan for the coming days? Roman's agitated behaviour got me thinking, and I don't claim to be an expert in werewolf psychology (:D), but does he need to mate? To stake a claim, particularly when Dean has been around her? It sounds like she needs to invest in more silver, just in case.

Must know more! (Said in a respectful way.)

Initially, I thought 'whoo, sexy threesome!' but then I remembered that Butt Nakey Romie and I are committed to one another - they better not go there!

This was fantastic. The shop scene was so atmospheric, I got a very cool vibe from the place, it felt very Professor Trelawney from Harry Potter. The little details sucked me in, but that's always been the case with your writing. When Dean mentioned killing, my heart sank. Romie is stuck in there somewhere, give him a chance!

I really like Mack, she's selfless, but courageous. The fact that she was thinking of sparing others was touching, and then her decision to go and face this unpredictable, dangerous creature spoke volumes about her strength. The sea turtle necklace! I love it. Did he never get a chance to give it to her? I want backstory! (Please :D)

The conflict between man and beast was written so beautifully! I feel so badly for him, and yet love the drama that his curse creates. And then DEAN! That upped the ante by about a million. I can't wait for them to get down to Louisiana and all of the scenarios that will follow. Two men who love her under one roof? One of whom could easily kill the other? Another who could willingly kill the other if he really had to? Amazing.

And Loki is a beaut, too.

Yes! An update and it kicked it too! I loved her decision to go back and take one for the team, so to speak. I know, I'm horrible but when he says 'Mine' I just get all mushy and light-headed. *shrugs* I make no excuses and offer no apologies. Hahaha! On-the-fly plot twist with Dean laying lips on Mack! Yes! And no, I'm not complaining. But...*points* there's Ro and he appears pissed. Hahaha! She calmed him a bit then Dean comes in and puts his scent, hands, and lips on his mate. I feel an ouch in the near future.