Reviews for Torn
Guest chapter 13 . 12/31/2017
Noooo! Please continue
HarukaDoodlez chapter 13 . 12/23/2017
I'm so happy to see this has more chapters :3 I really really hope to know how this ends!
SSSinsterWolf chapter 3 . 11/20/2017
AGGGHHGGH I HATE THAT SANETOSHI!
SSSinsterWolf chapter 1 . 11/20/2017
I'll KILL that monster for harming my Makoto! Just kidding! Love the story and the idea! Keep it up!
Guest chapter 13 . 4/6/2017
omfg. this was amazingggggg. I cried so hard . wheres the 14th chappteerrrrrrrrrrr daym it
That0neBitchOverThere chapter 13 . 2/21/2017
I'm just gonna resign myself to the tears, okay?
This... This story had hit me in the emotions so hard.
I was expecting pain, but not like this. Not on this level. I...
I am now emotionally destroyed.
Thank you for that.
I'll just be sitting here in the corner, crying as I wait for an update, alright?
nahidachaudhry chapter 13 . 10/17/2016
This is my very first fanfiction that I've read, and I was really moved. Actually had tears for Makoto. I'm impatiently waiting for chapter 14.
Guest chapter 13 . 10/15/2016
This fanfic did some scary stuff to me. I must've cried at some unknown point while reading, because I found myself wiping away tears that were threating to take refuge on my already tear-stained pillow. Plus the doctor made me feel EXTREMELY uncomfortable especially when he was close with Makoto and that near rape scene got me feeling all weird inside. Not to say that's necessarily bad but it just... took me by surprise that I was suddenly getting really engrossed in the story and how this fanfic had a completely different feel to it than the anime itself.
Stark contrast if I must say.

Oh, and the small fact that this fic had me having creepy meat nightmares where a scary and perverted doctor who had pink hair tried to RAPE . ME.
But ya know- I survived... Just stayed away from meat and the colour pink for a while...
mariyplfe chapter 13 . 6/11/2016
I can't wait to see how this will end. It has been a very good story and I'll follow you until the end of it Good luck

-Mariyplfe-
MakoHaruTrash chapter 12 . 1/22/2016
I check this every couple months and I absolutely love it please please please continue
Tsubasa chapter 12 . 9/26/2015
Some truth is coming out... Wow, this story has still managed to capture my interest despit it being so long since I first read it. I'm so glad you updated! Hope you'll update soon!
kmc995 chapter 12 . 8/25/2015
My day is always made when you update! Haha Maybe this coma will somehow snap his agnosia away...if he decides to stay, that is. Update when you can! I shall be eagerly awaiting :)

~Krista
reversaloftheheart chapter 12 . 8/22/2015
This story reminded SO MUCH of saya no uta.
I didn't play the game but i saw the beginning of it, anyways 1 questions remains are there gonne be more chapters? If not then i this story alot. If so then looking forward to it.
mariyplfe chapter 12 . 8/21/2015
This chapter was less painful than the others, and yet, it was terribly good ! I can't wait to read the next chapter ! Good luck

-Mariyplfe-
Stuck Kandi chapter 12 . 8/16/2015
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH! AN UPDATE!
THANKYOUUUUU!
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