Love this... what a great look into Killians mind in this moment... you did it so great...

I have to say, I should have gone to bed hours ago, but I have to keep reading. Your stories are entrancing. Spectacular. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.

I liked this. This story really captures the way Killian was really spun by that kiss. He went into it thinking he was half in love with her, but he was actually much further gone.

Wonderful story. I particularly love the view of Emma being a new beginning for him. Everything else an end, but with her, a new start is possible. So many feelings on this one!

Loved it!

I really enjoyed reading this! It was great and I'd love to see more of this! Would you consider writing more of this?

I love this! It was really great. I especially like the way you ended it, it wrapped everything up quite nicely!

Haha. That one line is my thoughts exactly: "She'd bested him yet again" lmao

This was amazing! Loved it

So painfully beautiful. Thank you for posting it.

That was amazing. You have such a beautiful way of phrasing things, you made his thoughts like poetry. Really well done, especially the ending. Loved it!

well written : )

This fic is fantastic! You captured his personality SO well - I'm kind of half in love with Emma just from reading this through his eyes :) I really, really enjoyed reading this!

great oneshot!

I think that it is so very close to what he must be thinking in the movie too.
I liked all of it but "they would set the forest on fire" was my favorite line.

Thanks!