Very interesting.

That was a great start. Really hope you decided to continue. It's been 5 years and I just found it now.

Great chapter Update soon

Update? Id like to see more!

Finish the story!

Please update soon, this is such a good premise

love it pls update. Also like his look at his father need for him to marry south

I think the idea of Rodrik Stark would surely inspire the North much more than Robb Stark. Someone truly from the North wouldn't have abandoned the bargain with the Freys for Jeyne Westerling.

Really enjoyed this. Great to see that Brandon thinks Ned's love of honour is foolish. I agree with him.

Hope to see more.

I have to agree with you. The lions are pricks and the whole star-crossed lovers thing is too damn much. There was this one Jamie story I liked where he rescued Rhaegar's daughter during the Sack and takes her to Dorne where he becomes her knight. It was called The Lion's Duty. But I can't find it anymore and it was a good story.

ANOTHER!

This was really good bro. Keep it up :)

Good first chapter. This first chapter has me thinking of what might happen when Brandon attempts to get Aerys to legitimize his son or if the Rebellion will happen before before he can see him. Or even if Rodrik is legitimized but Robert takes the throne and he is considered a bastard again. Either way I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)

I think this is a plausible look into Brandon's head. His fire (I know, I know, that's a heretical thing to say for a Stark) is evident, as well as his helplessness and his sense of duty for the North. I quite like the idea that Brandon really loved Barbrey and it was not just a fling.

For myself, I quite like stories where I'm dragged straight into the action and yours is one of those.

I only couldn't understand the change from "he" to "I" in the PoV in the middle of the chapter. Besides, you might like to differentiate between thoughts and direct speech. It's confusing. Maybe a different font for thoughts?

You seem to be up to a great start. Keep going.