| Reviews for Naruto and his pokegirls |
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   lava213 chapter 7 . 8/22 good chapter hope to read more soon and keep up the good work |
| lou2003us chapter 7 . 8/6 Interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work! |
| The Impossible Muffin chapter 7 . 8/5 I'm assuming Mukudori is supposed to be an Eevee, but aren't they more foxlike than weasellike? I'm also not entirely sure what Pokemon Dorei is supposed to be. |
| bloodbrother 18 chapter 7 . 8/5 Can't wait for more post soon. |
| Borello chapter 7 . 8/4 great work. i can't wait for the next chapter. |
| Striker - Master Of Hearts chapter 7 . 8/4 I wasn't expecting another chapter so soon but I am happy that there is one. I feel sorry for the squirtle girl but I can undestand why you handled it the way that you did. The changed pokedex entries are simpler and don't mess up the flow of the chapter now. Great chapter! I'm looking forward to the next one. |
| Axccel chapter 6 . 7/7 Where’s a chainsword when you need one? |
| Axccel chapter 5 . 7/7 That was an amusing way to take control! |
| Axccel chapter 4 . 7/7 No boi-on-boi. It’s gross. Just leave a pokegirl story as pokegirls. |
| Striker - Master Of Hearts chapter 6 . 7/1 If you do want to keep the longer pokedex entries you can make it so that Naruto can at first see a simplified version of the pokegirl's info and read a more detailed version later. I am still enjoying the story. Thank you for the new chapter. |
| Borello chapter 6 . 7/1 great work. i can't wait for the next chapter. |
| Trasgo Madaraz Artifex chapter 6 . 7/1 Damn! There it goes the little turtle. Her only sin was being born in that perverted (and horribly dangerous) world! ...Let's see how helpful Kurama is going to be from here and out. And about the Dex entries; Yeah, they are long-winded. So they can be just the name/titles, the main description page and a little resume. After that it could be just pointing that yes, the characters did read all the important info. Unless it's something of a personal variant you wanted to the entry. If a reader really want to know everything of a particular entry they should be able to find it with little difficulty with a Google search. |
| lou2003us chapter 6 . 7/1 I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work! |
| Striker - Master Of Hearts chapter 5 . 6/30 The story is fun and interesting. My only problem is the rather long pokedex entries. Other thank that it is rather good. |
| sk chapter 5 . 6/30 this chapter was good a bit shorter than expefted but hey it was greate didnt really exepeft for him to be getting a water type so soon |
