Uh oh.

I have enjoyed your adventures. It was very entertaining. I'd love to read more in this line of series.

Wow, this arc was quite interesting. At least Jenny will be able to marry and have Eve and Ianto the right way without being manipulated. And it was very admirable of Lilith for doing that, even though she might not have her power again. And also you once again made a great chapter with your ever expanding universes for Doctor Who as well. Keep up the good work.

Good to see that the alternative timeline dilemma was solved, even if it was done so in a very timey whimey way. I knew that deep down, Eve didn't have it in her to kill her family, and it was great to see how Jenny was unwilling to give up on her even when things got really bad with the Time Controller. Of course, the dirty work of killing can never be left to the Time Lords, and Jack just had to kill the Time Controller in place of Jenny, even though she was strongly willing to do so. And then, thanks to the help of Lilith, the whole mess was over for good, and Jenny, Jack, and the others return to their normal timeline (sort of, at least). Unfortunately, it looks like the Time Controller underwent a Master/Missy transformation and may interfere with the lives of the others once again. But maybe, just maybe, Jenny and Jack might have a peaceful wedding. After all, they'll need a break after all that's happened and what might go on in the future.

Looks like the timelines in this story keep getting more messy in each chapter. First, we had Jenny meeting Eve, Ianto, and Amy during Christmas, and then Jenny's alone with Eve, learning the awful truth about what's going on with her mind. I was saddened when the Time Controller gained full control of her mind and turned her into such a monster, especially upon seeing how cold she was towards Jenny and Ianto. But I have a feeling that the Doctor and Amy can help make things right again, because our favorite Time Lord family just never seems to let each other down, even when there's a villain forcing them to do so. It was great seeing the Eighth Doctor again, and I should probably add that because of an online borrowing program at my library, I'm now able to hear some of the Big Finish audios, and I just had to start with this Doctor (he's been good so far, by the way). Funny to see that Amy seemed instantly turned on by him, even going so far as somewhat regretting getting Chinny and Grumpy. I was also able to correctly guess that this sickness was due to pregnancy. Could we be getting another River soon, with a kid that Amy's already met at some point in this story, or is this going to be taking us in a different direction? Can't wait to see what you come up with.

More please:):):):)

OH... I LOVE IT,THANK YOU!
I CANT WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS!
I HOPE JENNY GETS TO KEEP HER BABY AND JACK!
DONT LET JACK GO BACK TO LILLITH!
IF TIME REWINDS,LET IT REWIND TO THE START
WHEN JACK AND JENNYS FIRST GOT TOGETHER!
THAAT WAY JENNY GETS TO KEEP HER BABY!
AMAZING,AS UPDATE SOON!
THANK YOU!

The DOCTOR FAINTED!
Thank you for using my suggestion!
wonderful chapter
,as always
please update soon
cant wait to fins out what happens

oh so who has the dalek time controler gotten on the wrong side of this time is it the eminence by any chance(i am suprised the master wasn't a bit more like oh him again, i remmber that guy, i quiet like him really). i wonder if it is the same old time controller from a different point in his timeline realitive to the doctor(so before he first met 11 but after he sort of dies and his clone is turned into a new version and maybe becomes him in the first place). can't wait to see whats next.

R.I.P Time Controller. He messed with the wrong person and he will regret it big time.

So rose changed everything in a single moment
Oh the irony in that statement

The doctor can't complain about using the last name Oswald
He kept Calling them Mr. and Mrs. pond the whole time so he can't complain

Yea, keeping secrets is not exactly the Doctor's specialty.
Yea, no need to place additional emotional strain on everyone.
Attack Eyebrows, ACTIVATE!
Dammit, I can't actually take a side on this. Emotionally torturing Jen should be against the laws of the Universe, but not telling the Doctor everything could result in disasters.
Yea, Time always corrects itself. Unless someone powerful stares at it, in which cases it goes to take a nap.
12 still has "continued existence" credits?
The banter is always effective at making him talk.
Yea, I assume that it would be mildly difficult for Clara to learn about it while growing up.
Why does he have the book in his poc... Nevermind. I just remembered that he has the kitchen sink there too.
Hey, don't say anything against the Doctor's books.
*hides in a corner* "Occasionally"? You're dead Doc.
The Universe starts trying to convince the Doctor otherwise. Zero point three seconds later the eyebrows attack.
Yea, the brilliance is so great that nothing and no one can extinguish it.
Yea, the Jacks are lucky to only be sleeping for a few hours.
"A stray Jack Harkness" I'm sure it would be interesting to see that written on a report.
Careful Rory, you might get hit by a stray... argument? I'm not sure what the argumentative equivalent of a bullet is.
And here goes Time being altered again.
Suuuuuuuure. Now your plan is completely fool-proof.
And every single villain is still obsessed by the prophecy of the Hybrid. *giggles* Because such a thing never backfires. *uses Galactic Renamer to swap Skaro and Gallifrey*
Yea, Clara will be a great influence for the baby.
The rumors about Clara being unable to keep a secret are dirty lies.
Of course the only reason for the Doctor to appear is when trouble is around.

SEEKING CURE FOR MAIN EMOTIONAL SYSTEM CORE.
Legends of Flarrow (very late) comments:
ERROR: Arrow comments not found. 4 episodes still missing.
I'm wondering if they'll seriously try to do Flashpoint and if it'll affect Arrow (and Legends).
Also, that is pure BS Rip. Depowered Damien wouldn't actually be able of blinking before getting frozen and burned and thrown into the heart of the sun.

So, I found myself reading from the beginning once again. I always thought Clara was the one who could most likely pass off as a Time Lord, but when taking the birth of River Song into consideration, it does make sense how Amy may not have remained fully human. It does make me wonder how this could have affected Rory though. Perhaps that's what she finds out in the next chapter, but if I know one thing for sure, it's that those two can never be permanently separated, so Rory would still love her whether she's human or not. And if Clara can continue on as her friend, that would help ease the transition for sure, since nobody understands having inexplicable powers more than the Impossible Girl.

Jenny gets pregnant! even better! love this ship!
I cant wait to read the next chapter!
please update soon!