I knew it. I saw it, right in the 2nd chapter coming towards me like a certain Rock Lee s kick yet there's little that I can do now. For I am truly and certainly hooked. There's little to do now but to pray that you keep the fluff minimum. DAM you author for this wonderfully terrible story.

Please please no yaoi, it's like I am in a constant horror of what might come but I still can't look away. Just cause it's that good.

I miss this story, when are you going to update it. You have one of the best writing styles please continue the story till the end

Hoping you're going to finish this at some point, so near the end now and I have loved this story of yours so much.
Great stuff.

Gah! I need to read more! Please don't make it like the second half of SAO though :( I just want to see them happy in real life, not have one of them captured in a bird cage forever. I need to see the irl wedding! please!

They are too damn cute! Im sorry I didn't leaving a glowing review at the end of every single chapter, I just got too caught up on hitting the next button as soon as possible. Spend all afternoon reading this fic, and now I'm going to have to go read the rest of your stories. and keep in mind this is now a higher priority than watching the new SAO episode that came out yesterday. I hope you can tell that I mean that as quite the compliment, seeing as you so thoroughly enjoy the series yourself. Anyways, LOVE THIS STORY!

I LOVE Levi's POV. Special motherfucker. perfect lol. You keep him in character so well, it's an absolute pleasure to read :) my face hurts I'm grinning so much. 333

I didn't really want to read a novel-length fic, but this is just too good to put down! I love how closely you stick to the SAO universe and throw in some AoT hints here and there. And such a great writer! Do you have books published somewhere that I need to go buy?

I so don't want this story to end! You write it so well and it's just perfect!

Oh my god my babies
I can't even begin
I mean
I've just waited for so long
And like
Well
Ah
Dude
Just
Oh man
I came out here to have a good time
And I'm honestly feeling so attacked right now
But seriously I cannot
My feels are aching
This is even worse than watching the actual show
And I cried like a bitch when Kirito and ASUNA were overlooking Aincrad breaking.
Speaking of which I was kinda wondering if they still existed or if there just happened to be a Kirito parallel.
Also it'd be like totally babies if Erwin were actually Akhiko
Like wow such mind blow
Or maybe Nile since he's a total urethra.
Okay this is really dragging out
So ya know
Bye bye
Alsomaybetheycouldtryoutalfheimafterawhileandashitloadofarguingkbye

ooh so they're finally out! v interested to read the next chapter... in fact impatient, lol.
great update- as ever.
Keep em coming :)

Ooh things just got interesting :)

STUPID CUTIES WITH THEIR CUTINESS
I NEED MORE

Saturday morning treat :)

Hot update, but lots of emotion too... very satisfying. Interesting to see what happens to them next so looking forward to the next chapter.

Thanks for this.
EvilMidget6

Fucking yaoi fangirls...

Really killing the anime verse with your god-foresaken gay male fetishes. I'm a man myself and yet I don't want to read or watch a relationship about lesbians purely because it doesn't make a good story.

You guys are the reason why the Bleach archive is 85% filled with terrible yaoi pairing stories.

Seriously need to calm the fuck down.

If you want gay males boning each other go to a porn site, geez...