Excellent story, i loved it so much!
xoxox

I hope peter is alright in being a father and all i just wish that felix was dead and i will sure to kill felix this time to mess his leader betrayal look and given a name i know who is that voice and its ursula the sea witch im so cold and bleeding rage toward her its fuckin bull shit and what is that when something happen to him and her well felix i thought you were pan bestfriend and loyal lost boy but i understand that you want to kill wendy .wendy was kind of look alike my bestfriend of my boyfriend and me .also i want them down i just want pan and wendy be free no worries and free and have fun ,well see you again felix i do wish that you were dead and gone out of neverland .think evil thoughts felix your going to die . SWEET EVIL NIGHTMARE & EVIL THOUGHTS FELIX -the gold one is for wendy
- and the silver is for pan king of neverland

What just happen peter becomes grown up that wouldnt be fair neverland use to says that grown ups where just failure peterpan will never become a father he will send wendy and his child away to grow up because neverland needs him and no matter what happens he will turn on his bad side and rule again .no matter where you go peter you cant hide from your destiny and it will be following you,and i wish felix was never been good side to peter soon enough he will get what we want for peter and when the time comes he will be die felix will die forever hahahahahahaha evil laught.

I will hope he will go back the way he was with wendy and they will have fun .better luck next time big brother peter pan tomorrow is the new day and soon you will be joining us when we take your revenge as well then we will be your family .oh can you pls make peter sister with dragons and werewolfs and his family on neverland pls .if you dont make them peter will be angry and he needs to know them you know how peter misses hes family .

First of all, his name isn't peter. It's malcolm. I know it's a fanfiction and everything, but it just bothers me.

honey in once upon a time peter pan is supposed to be evil so maybe you could be like when emma and everybody went to get henry back from peter. and when they arrive he is playing mind games with them not knowing he loves SOMEONE (wendy) without knowing and then wendy dies and comes back

i think i mixed it up how she in the first place but you get my point you should not have put anything in with blue or how wendy arrived at the island with by the way you also did wrong it was peter's SHADOW that brought her

I kind of wish regina had the last word

Felix is alive?

This is hilarious

Young love

Yay she's alive! Aww kill Felix

Aww

Awww...

I love happy endings!

FUCKING BEAUTIFUL
OMG

I just read through this story, and I just wanted to say, great job! I really enjoyed the the parts of Peter Pan when he was a young boy, very nicely written. Great job!