Reviews for Firelight |
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Guest chapter 9 . 7/31/2019 Your story has a plot hole you literally said hestia was warning him and told him just about everything as it was happening. Now your saying he knows close to nothing. Your writing needs help, besides there are better ways to go about getting rid of him then that. All in all the plot gets a solid 5/10 |
Guest chapter 6 . 7/31/2019 God you shit writers capture Hera horribly |
Guest chapter 3 . 7/31/2019 Wow so because Athena killed his lover he in turn abandons everyone even the ones that were his friends and completely innocent, amazingly childish. |
Guest chapter 8 . 6/5/2019 GRAPES ARE NOT GREY!? |
DaughterofAiluros chapter 8 . 10/1/2018 GRAPES ARE NOT GREY! |
shinoa44 chapter 10 . 9/18/2018 please don't let percy die. |
Willemhendrik chapter 10 . 9/4/2018 continue |
Guest chapter 4 . 6/22/2018 So new york |
Entropy the Eternal Destroyer chapter 8 . 5/23/2018 Grapes are not gray indeed. |
Guest chapter 10 . 2/6/2018 DAMN YOU GUYS Y DID YOU MURDERED ANNABETH ATHENA HOW DARE YOU ZEUS IM GONNA THROW YOU AWAY FOR BEING THE MASTERMIND THAT KILLED ANNABETH POOR PERCE |
Brother Of Void chapter 1 . 1/9/2018 Why. Hemera is Primordial of Day |
paz chapter 10 . 3/10/2017 Lovely |
WeAreIdealist chapter 1 . 12/20/2016 PercyxApollo |
elianathomas04 chapter 10 . 12/16/2016 Hi. Can you please update. This is a really good story but the last time you updated was 2014 and it's almost 2017 so please update. I don't think you should add Danaƫ to the story because that just kind of gets everybody sidetracked. Also I think Hades is kind off OOC when he talks to Poseidon so you might just want to make him a bit less empathetic. But this is a really good story AND UPDATE! |
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 6 . 8/2/2016 Okay, why does Hera not like Perseus? |