Reviews for Sweet Memory |
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DarkKirito2001 chapter 1 . 4/3/2017 I like this fan-fiction a lot, but work on your English a little more |
ZEE chapter 1 . 8/5/2016 Just wanna say that was awesome and I really wanna know what happens next |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2016 Fucking good please make more of this |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2015 Cuteness overload! Great start for our first fanfiction ;) Just have to work on our spacing and some spelling errors, thats all, Ja neh |
MiracleShine chapter 1 . 7/20/2015 ...that was cute! Oh and I don't know If you remember but Momoi calls Kise Ki-chan!...Cute one-shot! |
TRickyRaid chapter 1 . 3/4/2015 this is a great fanfic, please write more, all my friends love your stories |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/23/2014 O.o DAAAA FEELLLLLLLLSSSSSS |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/11/2014 Pls. Write more |
cherryapplegirl chapter 1 . 2/4/2014 I got so mad thinking it was going to be sad and bitter kuroko x momoi story but it true out good and left with a warm feeling |
Zetsueno chapter 1 . 10/15/2013 The premise of the fic isn't bad in itself. Infact, its rather good. I'm assuming you're not familiar with the manga. A couple of the references here seems to come from second ep of KnB second season. I think you should consider editing your fic better. A lot of sentences seems scattered. Proper editing will attract more readers. Aside from this, you should work on your grammar and punctuation. Using capital letters in for words other than names in the middle of sentences comes off as rather unpleasant. |