Holy moly, this is so heartbreakingly beautiful... Damn the feels. You are amazing and how you've written this story? Mind blowing, really! I've just read this three chapters so quickly, but I feel like I've read this a million times. I love it dearly with my soul.

It's like your story has been a dear friend of mine, I know, sounds silly, but it feels so familiar. This is amazingly good, honestly, I don't know if I can pick enough words to say how well done this is, the writing is truly marvelous and I'm so hooked already.

I really hope you continue this story, it's really, really good, and I'm very intrigued about what's gonna happen next. Please, please continue this! This story is a masterpiece and it has so much potential already.

It's truly incredible!

My best wishes for you!

loved it

Dude the feels are flowing out of my eyes with how sad this ending is! TT_TT Why Dustfinger no like Rayna like that?

I love this so much but my heart! it hurts! lol XD you did an amazing job on the story, the plot, the characters, everything. 3 I couldn't find the happy alternative one? have you made it or am I just blind lol xD please let me know I love this and would much like to see them together!

THANK YOU FOR RIPPING MY HEART OUT, JOHN GREEN!

But no, seriously, I enjoyed reading every word despite the emotional pain you put me through. My heart is aching for Rayna and now I want to beat Dustfinger over the head with a very pointy stick.

I eagerly await the next update, whenever that may be.

-MSH

Great chapter, can't wait for the next one. :)

This chapter made me really sad, with the fate of a lot of the characters. But I still really liked it. Can't wait to see what happens next. Good job, keep it up. :)

Omg! I love this story! I have cried multiple times! But I hate his wife. i think Dusty and Rayna should be together :) Please update!

a wonderful chapter. I hope Meggie and Farid come over to the earthworld soon.

This was really cool. I read the books ages ago so like you my knowledge is limited. I think you have done an excellent job. You should defiantly continue. But i think maybe the chapter is a bit too long. Can't wait for the next chapter